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for Demeter\'s Embrace

by Frkjensen7400

person Trelweny
schedule July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant, although I would have thought Draco to remain blind a little longer.

Thanks for writing!
person kazfeist
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This feels as thought the fifth chapter is the ending one. A lovely story arc. Some typos, but that happens. I thought the emotional progression, even though it was only in five chapters, was very realistic. The use of Demeter was inventive and unique. Thanks for a great journey. :D