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Hey! So I love your story, it's super interesting, and I can't wait to see where it goes. Im curious as to whether your going to add in any more of the wizarding world, though I know right now it doesn't really look like it. Also, so I'm from WA also, and I know that we do sometimes get really bad snowstorms/pile-ups on I-5, however I jst really had to tell you that your geography is off. Forks is on the Peninsula, and I-5 doesn't run down it. The only Big roads by Forks are highways 110 and 101, both of which could be dangerous during snowy times, because they are very curvy 2-lane roads. I've been out there before (North of Forks) and ever since, whenever I read a Fanfic that has Seattle a 1/2 hour away it's always a little frustrating, though I know most people wouldn't know that unless they google mapped it. Forks is actually a 4-5 hour drive away from Seattle, which includes a ferry ride at the Ferry Docks in Edmonds, where you can get stuck waiting for 2 hours (No joke, my bro got stuck on the peninsula side coming home from my sisters wedding which was at pretty much the farthest northwest point in WA on the Peninsula). So anyways, I-5 isn't anywhere near Forks.
I can't wait for more of your story though! :D

I can see why they are uncomfortable with the custom they should be glad Carlisle isn't like that.

Meeeeehhhhhh.... I think that you should totally write more... and update... and... please? come on... please??? I was all engrossed and shit... x_X and then it stopped.... *sigh* well I hope you do eventually finish this story... I just can't stand that it just stops and doesn't go further... and explain more... and just... you know... it's a great story by the way.... lol

An interesting story!! Looking forward to the next update.

WOW this is GREAT! I love this story! best HP/Twilight story I've ever read! I love it and I can't wait for more!




FYI: the last chapter you posted, the punctuation is all wonky, I don't know what happened, but it really makes it hard to read.

CH10 You need to really look at what you uploaded, for some reason your font has some added symbols throughout which makes it confusing
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Good chap though.
Dahlias

Good chapter!

This is great! I can't wait to see what happens next.

oh great. i don't think the cullens or harry will like this in the end. please update soon.
windingcircle4@yahoo.com

Always glad to see another update! And a good one at that too! Uh ohhhh Harry is in trouble!! I love your development of the characters! Can't wait for more soon!