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Love the title. After reading these two chapters, it definitely holds up! Good job. I can't wait to read more. :)

I love the insight you give into Draco's thoughts in this. Will this story have switching POV's or be based primarily on one?

You know for a second, I thought this was a one-shot. I was like, ''what tha'
mother-freakin' hell!!!''

Then I realized it wasn't. :-)

By the way, what does EWE mean..and while I'm at it what is HJ?

Wow! I'm loving this already! Though...it seems to be moving a little fast...but maybe more friction is yet to come? In any case, I'll read it and love it. Anything from Harry's POV? Might be interesting...I'm also interested in how Draco got to be working with Harry. So, to recap: Love it, Can't wait for an update!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS START. I THINK YOU SHOULD DEFINITELY CONTINUE THIS. DRACO IS SO AMAZING. WHY WOULDN'T HARRY EVENTUALLY FALL IN LOVE WITH HIM?! HE'S ABSOLUTELY PERFECT!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. BTW, I LOVE THE FACT THAT YOU PORTRAY DRACO AS SOMEONE WHO ALREADY KNOWS HARRY SO WELL. HIS ATTRACTION IS WELL-FOUNDED AND REALISTIC. YAY!

That Malfoy, ain't he the clever one to know his target so well as he dodges all comers while offering his own version of hard-to-get on Harry. He's one of the few people that sees Harry and not the "Chosen One", as he waits out the competition for his heart. I always wondered what it would have been like for them as friends (and more) if they had met under different circumstances. Malfoy is a much better choice as a lover, and a loving friend who has both wit and skill enough to keep Harry at his side. Well this is certainly another nice one on your part, so with no shame whatsoever I ask you to please continue writting more!

i cant wait for the next chapter, this story is off to such a great start.

Very nice. You have Draco down pat; still self-centered and greedy enough to maintain his character yet more mature and conniving due to his age and experiences. And Harry is also great; still an ace in battle but pretty oblivious and naive when it comes to emotions and other stuff. I can't wait to read more!

I've been a fan of yours ever since Building With Worn-Out Tools. I love your writing style and characterizations. I've never reviewed because I'm rather shy, but I thought, 'what the heck'. I really like your stories. I think this one sounds intriguing. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for writing these stories.

I like how you wrote Draco from his point of view. Very entertaining. Draco is being very cunning.