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for Said the Tortoise to the Hare

by Lomonaaeren

schedule September 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful, on of the best short stories in the world - how you managed to make them stay true to the charachters and at the same time have then grow into adults takes a lot of skills - I bow to you!
person Kat1132
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I want to fold this story up and put it in my pocket to keep with me always. Thanks for this lovely piece. I come back to it when I need a short romance that uplifts my spirit and just makes me happy and content.
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Draco is amazing. So cool and collected, biding his time, never making a miss-step... He takes my breath away.
THANK YOU for writing him like that and succeeding so beautifully at it. He's simply and utterly grogeous.
And Harry being so obvious was perfect. I loved the whole predator-tortoise/hare-seduction thread you had going on there. It was brilliant.
And Ginny was an utter fool.
The only thing I was left missing was the reaction of Ginny/Hermione/Ron on Draco's and Harry's relationship. But this whole thing was so enjoyable that it's entirely too easy to forget.

Once again, solid and clever writing without rushing. You leave me amazed.
person kati-chan
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was quite possibly the sweetest thing ever. Draco was perfect. Harry was perfect. PerfectPerfectPerfect. MmHmm. I am slightly in love with you, I'm afraid. ^_^;
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So very cute. ^^ The theme and Draco's attraction, but unpushy actions were so very adorable to read. I have to love when it is those friends that are trying to look out for their friend's best interest to the point of pushing the friend towards the thing they are trying to protect them from... Not that this Draco was a bad influence at all. Nice job with this.
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol i really liked this one
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful ^^ juuuust plani beautiful i'm so sorry its over. I love how you personify Draco as a driving passionate factor in Harry's life. Yet hidden oh how slytherin of him ^^ absolutely delightful.
person Rousy_P
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! for your patient Draco, who has learnt not to force things out. The POV is wonderful. Thanks!
person Ecks
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great ending! Still, Wish there was more *tear* lol
person butterpie
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow! I had a fearful moment there that Harry was someone polyjuiced to catch Draco off guard, but you ended it at the perfect point, with to two of them finally together at last. Funny how the more that everyone else interferred the more Harry stuck by Draco's side. That Malfoy is such a clever minx letting nature take its course and allowing his prey to come after him. No guy ever wants someone willing to fall into their hands without some effort on his part. It makes him appreciate the resulting end of a successful hunt, which for most males is the primative urge to find and seek the most coveted one that he desires most of all. Thank you for such a great story, and as always please continue to write on.