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Love it keep the chapters coming

I really liked the Harry-Wufei moment at the end. I'm glad that not all of the pilots are going to treat Harry as if he were fragile. He's not. Unfortunately for Wufei, I'm betting that Duo (and Heero) will see and interpret that hug in a bad way for Wufei.

I like it

i love it

OH, please update soon! please. i beg of you.
i can't wait, what will happen next and he got an ally out of wufei.
when i read this chapter, i assume that wufei knows who harry really is as wufei wants to have an alone time with harry and got back to the second chapter when he first met harry, you know the blushing. i thought that maybe wufei got the hots for harry and just want to know him... hehe...but as i read further more i don't think so. hmm, and poor heero and poor harry too, as they are subjected to duo's brother complex mode.
haha. so please update soon!!!

ok.... i have been nabbed. hook, line, and sinker!!!!!

i like the way you write. the flow, the ebb, the way it moves.....

the sensual stuff is coming....i can feel it.

great work!

laters! ~_^
miko

i love it

great story

That you decided to coverup Harry's use of magic with electrical problems was brilliant! I guess that also means that Duo can't possibly have magic. If he did, then it would have manifested in high-stress (ie. life and death) situations like when he was piloting his gundam. If that had happened then the gundam would have failed, so no magic for Duo. Anyway, when I was reading, earlier in the chapter, I was worried that the video camera's, that I'm sure are hidden all over Quatre's home, would catch Harry doing magic. But you wrote such a nifty solution for that. I'm really happy!

good chapter, poor Duo, poor others because of Duo