rate_review Reviews

please please PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just found this and got undeniably hooked! why did you stop? I am dying to see how it all turns out. hypotheses formed during reading must be confirmed or negated... PLEASE!
also, I realize it can be discouraging to post when it seems no one cares, but if you have something to say, you should say it. someone will always find it when they're supposed to. if you won't post further here, at least email me an outline of what else happened; better still, the chapters you had written. I'd really love to know.

Gods, this is good!

I feel that, whenever I stumble back into the HP fanfic world, and read a story where Draco's holding in (or, as in this story, showing) a lot of internal strife, it's overdone and kind of...fake, I guess.

Here, though, his troubles seem entirely real, and the amount of effort and detail--though not too much detail--that you put into his and Hermione's thoughts really shows.

You've done an outstanding job so far, and I just sat here for fifteen minutes all super angry because the site was slow and wouldn't load and I wanted to read more but couldn't, and I also couldn't review, but now I have! -deep breath-

Anyway! I'm going to read more now. This is such a good read.

Oh god, I want to read moooore!
This is such an exceptional story. Their relationship is so turbid andandand...so perfect for them, really.
I hope to see more of this soon. Good luck with the writing!

Update soon. I like this fanfic. Thanks.

I do hope you update regularly. An absolutely stunning story, can't wait to read more.

This is an extremely interesting take on Draco's psyche. I definitely like. Please update with the next chapter, as I am interested in knowing where the plot goes!

Ok..so my review didn't take the first time..but if for some reason it did and I just didn't see it I apologize for the double. This is really a fantastic story - intense! To watch someone go through such utterly destructive behavior...you know I think Hermione is in way over her head here. Of course, she probably knows that. It's so hard watching someone you love crash and burn so brilliantly. Oh, I know that neither have said the 4-letter word...but something tells me its there..just below the surface...it's why he pushes her away. Another sacrifice. This is a brilliant story. I look forward to the next update! :)

OMG! I want more! I really have enjoyed this story immensely!

His self loathing and wanting to die is sad, but the kiss! I can't wait to see her reaction, but I'm guessing it's a good one (at first at least).