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by tsorg

person darkmoonsfalcon
schedule January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally review but I just couldn't resist with this one. I would love to see it expanded on by a few more chapters, perferably with Lucius pulling strings to screw over both her old and her new boss for what happened to her, and for all three of them to be out and run into Ron and his playmate... having Lucius and Severus flaunting their little threesome at him. I think you could make it really funny.
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have such a love of the Severus, Lucius, and Hermione set. Very well done.
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Forget Ron Weasley, Hermione can find another job and her life just got very interesting. Loved the story, I'm enjoying your work inspite of being a sshg fan. Thanks for sharing with us and expanding my horizons. :)
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you've been in my head recently. Can't really explain why one of my favorite scenarios would appear, otherwise! Very well done!
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I voted for this! LOL

Anyhoo, I think this is a lovely oneshot. I have to laugh though at Hermione doing tequila shots. It makes me think of this song by Confederate Railroad called She Took it Like a Man.

I think it makes perfect sense that the Ministry of Magic would be a good-ole-boy kind of organization. They are pretty antiquated after all.

And Ron is a loser for dumping her.

person Elphaba
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot Hot Hot! Wow! holy Hell! Great job!
person kittycat30
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a way to start the weekend! Great story!
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was smutastic xxx

I think you should have another chapter where she is engaged to these two men and Ron and Emmie come into the place they are having it....you continue from there xxx
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOH, Very hot! Now I'll have something nice to dream about tonight; thanks so much!
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was completely awesome! But I confess that I'd love to see at least one more chapter showing a reaction from Ron or something. That would be great. lol Either way, I loved this!