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for One Life for Another

by andarte

person mlui
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
11: Very nice chapter! Couldn't Draco still go to his summons for now?
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was a *brilliant* chapter!! I am really really really enjoying your story. There's not enough pagan D/Hr stories out there!!
person mlui
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
10: Yah!! Another update!! This was a very interesting chapter, especially since it talked about the magic. I can't wait to see the selected Order members reactions! I really want to see Severus' when he realizes Draco is there! =)
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you post this ... anxiety is the word .... Love this Galahad/Draco combination that you have done is simply great!!!! MORE MORE MORE PLEASE..........
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, so Draco is Galahad and he remembers now....how will Hermione react? Hmm, not sure if the daughter should be Galahad or Dralahad (Draco/Galahad)....but I guess its the same? What now?
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'll have you, I'll have you....

Okay...what happened at Grimwauld???
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well, Draco is her Protector....how will the others react?
person mlui
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
9: Great chapter! No I don't mind you updating early! =) Well, I would have supposed that she'd be somewhat incacipated since she's pregnant, but it also makes sense that she needs to control her powers too. I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was a fabulous update, so glad they found each other again!!
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like this story idea. You used the time turner but in such an original way. Also, you write very well and are keeping the characters consistent within the story. With the Lake missing its' Lady for so long this could also explain the rise of two Dark Lords so close together.