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for One Life for Another

by andarte

person Trelweny
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was a very pleasing read. The chapters after Hermione's return seemed to go faster than the earlier chapters though somehow.

I think Hermione would make a great Lady of the Lake, especially when both are known for their wisdom. The learning and the particularities towards both spell and 'potion' equivalent were brilliant.

Did Draco ever tell Hermione that he really had liked her already AS Draco, but just couldn't let himself? I would have liked to see that.

Thanks so much for writing!
person Glorioux
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So romantic....sad that sir g. Had to die but is well all that end well. Good tale
person kazfeist
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I was waiting for the story to finish before reading it all. Very unique and intriguing premise, and the grey eyes are a give-away, in my humble opinion. I can't wait to see your spin on this story. :D
person kazfeist
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the third chapter, and thought the amount of plot development and backstory was just right. :D
person kazfeist
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Liked the fourth chapter, as well. The contrast, for Hermione, between her mentor McGonagall and Nimue was nicely drawn. :D
person kazfeist
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The sacrifice chapter was WONDERFUL! Inventive way of tying in the Grail portion of the story, and the use of blood and hair in soul transference is one I've not really seen before. One wonders if that was why he subconsciously did it? :D
person kazfeist
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dun, dun, dun, DUNNNNN! Of course the baby will have grey eyes. :D
person kazfeist
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A charming story, all round. :D
person mlui
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
14: Aww, a very nice and fitting ending! I liked the last line...it was bittersweet. =)
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TY WE WILL BE WATCHING FOR THOSE NEW STORIES..