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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVE your story. A chase between a cat and a mouse, both switching roles at times, taunting, cunning. I'm breathless by the end of every chapter, unable to bear the wait for the next (though you update quite frequently, THANK YOU ♥ )
Harry made the mistake of revealing that he defeated his share of Dark wizards, and Draco knows that his writer could be someone connected to the Auror Department. He has his proof now. I feel the end is near...!
Harry made the mistake of revealing that he defeated his share of Dark wizards, and Draco knows that his writer could be someone connected to the Auror Department. He has his proof now. I feel the end is near...!
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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well the game has stepped up several notches now hasn't it? Sympathetic magic seems to get the best results as Harry has given Draco more ammo to locate him. Boy that Malfoy certainly stirred up a heap of emotions here, especially since Astoria gave away a rather telling clue about the depth of guilt, and no doubt other emotions that abound in this mysterious person he is seeking. Love makes people act foolishly, but anger can leave you wide open before you remember to think things out. The remarks in that letter were well planned as they honed in on everything Harry would never accept in a relationship. This just keeps getting better, as Harry must now decide what to do as the tables have turned on him. I look forward to what you have up you sleeve next, so by all meants please continue.
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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7
Games. I love games. x3 You cannot possibly be updating this fast enough for me to be happy, but I'm thrilled that you update as fast as you do anyway. I can't get the silly grin off my face over this. It makes me want to start writing anonymous letters to someone, myself, XDD This is nothing less than perfect, and I love it.
Games. I love games. x3 You cannot possibly be updating this fast enough for me to be happy, but I'm thrilled that you update as fast as you do anyway. I can't get the silly grin off my face over this. It makes me want to start writing anonymous letters to someone, myself, XDD This is nothing less than perfect, and I love it.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awwww!!!
draco is gonna find out soon, isn't he?
oooh, cant wait to see his reaction!
although i do feel sorry that harry is losing control.
we all knew he would, but it's still slightly upsetting to read it.
and i do hope that draco and harry are equals. i love seeing either harry or draco as dominant, but i think in this story it'd be nice to see them as equals.
hope its somewhat of a happy ending for them both, at least
cant wait for your next update!! i love how ur updating so soon!
looking forward to the next chapter!!
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draco is gonna find out soon, isn't he?
oooh, cant wait to see his reaction!
although i do feel sorry that harry is losing control.
we all knew he would, but it's still slightly upsetting to read it.
and i do hope that draco and harry are equals. i love seeing either harry or draco as dominant, but i think in this story it'd be nice to see them as equals.
hope its somewhat of a happy ending for them both, at least
cant wait for your next update!! i love how ur updating so soon!
looking forward to the next chapter!!
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well then. Thank you for updating once more. I must say, the more I read this fic, the more I hear the music from 'Code Geass' playing inside of my head. Excellent job! I love an engaging piece of fiction!
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #6...
Damn it to hell....damn it to HELL!!!! Damn it to BLOODY Hell!! Why did you
leave it at THAT point!!!
That's like getting all excited from intense foreplay, then the DAMN phone
rings!!! I want another chapter NOW!!!
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*ahem* on tha' serious tip, I can HONESTLY say it's been a LOOOONG time since I've gotten excited over a story/chapter....you're getting better at the action, even if it IS sexually-charged. :-)
Damn it to hell....damn it to HELL!!!! Damn it to BLOODY Hell!! Why did you
leave it at THAT point!!!
That's like getting all excited from intense foreplay, then the DAMN phone
rings!!! I want another chapter NOW!!!
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*ahem* on tha' serious tip, I can HONESTLY say it's been a LOOOONG time since I've gotten excited over a story/chapter....you're getting better at the action, even if it IS sexually-charged. :-)
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an exciting chapter, I can hardly wait for chapter 7! I thought that Astoria would hear some of Harry's thoughts about his feelings about Draco, but it seems he could control what he would pass on to her, very interesting.
And thanks for the explanation about the polyjuice, for some reason, I thought it might be something Harry would be able to get without too much difficulty (being the Hero and all), but maybe it is like ordering a pair of glasses and indeed takes up a long time to obtain.
I really enjoyed the chase scene, Bravo Draco for your seeker-like reflexes, and Harry was very good as well, it couldn't have been easy running under a cloak.
And thanks for the explanation about the polyjuice, for some reason, I thought it might be something Harry would be able to get without too much difficulty (being the Hero and all), but maybe it is like ordering a pair of glasses and indeed takes up a long time to obtain.
I really enjoyed the chase scene, Bravo Draco for your seeker-like reflexes, and Harry was very good as well, it couldn't have been easy running under a cloak.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my FAVORITE stories!! Please update!! I can't WAIT for more!
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6
This was such a surprising update. x3 Not because of what happened, but just because I wasn't expecting it. It was a very pleasant surprise, though. I can't tell you how excited I am to see the next chapter. And you promised in another review-reply that the contest of wills is just beginning. *happy* I'm already in love with your portrayal of Draco in this. I can't wait to see how it unfolds.
This was such a surprising update. x3 Not because of what happened, but just because I wasn't expecting it. It was a very pleasant surprise, though. I can't tell you how excited I am to see the next chapter. And you promised in another review-reply that the contest of wills is just beginning. *happy* I'm already in love with your portrayal of Draco in this. I can't wait to see how it unfolds.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think that just how Harry wants to teach Draco about humility, Draco can teach him about his martyr complex. I'm excited that the action's starting. I can't wait till Draco finds that it's Harry. I think that it'll be really explosive. I also love how Harry was doing the chasing like a little ferret, and he's the one running like a coward now. lol. Anyways, I'm really glad that Astoria's been booted out. I think she should've received a swift kick in the @#& for having the nerve to come between destiny. lol. anyways, great writing as usual.