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by Lomonaaeren

schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh! You cut it off right before the foreplay... I mean fighting! Before Draco showed up, I was hoping to ask if there would be some sort of Harry/Draco/Rodrigo 'interaction', but this is far better.

As usual, this is another of your stories that I love. Is it wrong that I find the letters to be highly arousing? I mean, that's why we all came to the same conclusion while reading the JKR books, which is under the surface of all that Harry/Draco fighting, there was really hot passion.

I do have one legitimate question, though. So many stories, not your stories, but others, have this huge build up and once the have sex the story immediately ends. I was wondering if you will have a post coital wrap up of what happens to them?

Thank you for a wonderful story.
-- L
person tiggator
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! What a way to end it there!! So now he knows. Oh goodness. Can't wait to see what happens next. :) Good job, once again.
person YanaYugi
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww i was enjoying that
you write really good stories
please will the next chapter be out soon
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8

'Enjoying' is an understatement. I'm riveted to this fic like I've been nailed to it. I realise that I sound creepy and stalkerish, and I'm not about to make it any less so - I've been reading all your old fanfics over the past few days, too, and am constantly surprised and amazed by the sheer differences; from a loving and kind Malfoy family to overbearing and possessive, and all your different-but-perfect characterisations of Draco (Harry's pretty much the same, any way you spin him, but that's mostly because you've got so much of Harry handed to you in the books, whereas Draco's a complete mystery. Still, even he's different enough from fic to fic to make it believable, and that's part of the allure.)

I was so happy to see Harry get out of the country, and also find someone in Spain whom he liked, and liked him back, and for a moment, when I realised that Draco was being called to his side, I was afraid that he'd find them in flagrante delicto but they didn't get a chance to get that far. XD I can't wait to see what happens next; I can't believe they're fighting, after they both went through all that trouble. XD
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! They're dueling? Soooo need chapter 9!!!
person MewMew2
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I must say, this is one of my favorite chapters to date. I recently came back form a trip to Spain, and thus loved the location chosen for Harry. Please update again when you can, I would love to read about the duel of strained emotions of epic proportions soon!
person Juana13
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AH!!!! It's getting better and better! but why'd you have to end it there! ...tease... : (
j/k
glad you updated.
finally, draco meets harry! and is he not shocked? or angry? maybe he's accepted it already?
well, glad how it is so far. i'm happy to see that draco didn't start calling him disgusting names right away. wonder what their fight is going to be....
cant wait to read more! update soon please! : )
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 8!!! Draco might be pushing Harry into his web but he might lose him in the process!!! Soooo need chapter 8!!!
person SP777
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #7...

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person DHnotHD
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 is great! Clever Draco! Clever, manipulative, sneaky... AWESOME! You write Draco sooooo well!!! I prefer to think of Harry as pure and innocent (and a little dense, and the kind of person who does things without thinking twice before doing them, so that works too).
I'm looking forward to chapter 8.