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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #9...
1. I'm coming to the conclusion that these recent ventures back into writing
action scenes is a prerequisite for BIGger things in the future.
2. Since I've been gone awhile, i.e. reading other stories, I forgot what I was
kicking you for. :-)
3. Speaking of stories, I MUST mention 3. These are blast from YOUR past, but I
truly enjoyed ''Still Pools & Starlight [?]'', if any story could be a candidate for
the ''Awww...'' factor, that story would be it. :-)
Then, there's ''A Year's Temptation'', I have to applaud you, it's rare you can
take the Veela theme and do something different with it, as a matter of fact
there's one other story that did...but the author NEVER finished it, ''Veela Inheritance Problems'', damn good plot...that won't be finished.
I think there was another one, but I can't think of it.
4. Oh, remember I mentioned about you doing a Quidditch scene in a story that
sounded like I was asking for 'play-by-play' action? Well, it was more of what you
did in ''A. Y. T.'', the March or April chapter when Draco was trying to impress
Harry with his Quidditch skills.
The action with the bludgers & Beaters was something I was talking about. But, of course you would have to be in the mood to write something like that again. I hope
you do someday...
5. About this chapter, I think you had fun writing this, especially from Draco's
POV, as a matter of fact, I am now truly convinced you see yourself in Draco
personality-wise to a slight degree. :-)
1. I'm coming to the conclusion that these recent ventures back into writing
action scenes is a prerequisite for BIGger things in the future.
2. Since I've been gone awhile, i.e. reading other stories, I forgot what I was
kicking you for. :-)
3. Speaking of stories, I MUST mention 3. These are blast from YOUR past, but I
truly enjoyed ''Still Pools & Starlight [?]'', if any story could be a candidate for
the ''Awww...'' factor, that story would be it. :-)
Then, there's ''A Year's Temptation'', I have to applaud you, it's rare you can
take the Veela theme and do something different with it, as a matter of fact
there's one other story that did...but the author NEVER finished it, ''Veela Inheritance Problems'', damn good plot...that won't be finished.
I think there was another one, but I can't think of it.
4. Oh, remember I mentioned about you doing a Quidditch scene in a story that
sounded like I was asking for 'play-by-play' action? Well, it was more of what you
did in ''A. Y. T.'', the March or April chapter when Draco was trying to impress
Harry with his Quidditch skills.
The action with the bludgers & Beaters was something I was talking about. But, of course you would have to be in the mood to write something like that again. I hope
you do someday...
5. About this chapter, I think you had fun writing this, especially from Draco's
POV, as a matter of fact, I am now truly convinced you see yourself in Draco
personality-wise to a slight degree. :-)
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories! Especially this one, to be honest I kept smiling through the fighting. O.O It just read like foreplay to me (which it turned out it was?). Very good, but your style of writing is just really, really gripping so I can't wait to read more from you!
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well. Damn. You certainly do know how to speed up my breathing a bit :)
That was potentially my favorite chapter you've written... I think you've got their characters down perfectly, and the fight, and the subsequent... frotting(? lol) was just hott.
Great job here :)
That was potentially my favorite chapter you've written... I think you've got their characters down perfectly, and the fight, and the subsequent... frotting(? lol) was just hott.
Great job here :)
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
is draco going to be possessive
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooh! can't wait for the next chapter! i'm glad that harry is now considering draco's offer and that they might go to britain together.
wonder whats gonna happen next...
update soon! : ) can't wait!!
wonder whats gonna happen next...
update soon! : ) can't wait!!
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whew, that was some fight there, and I enjoyed it all, especially the last part, you minx you! No doubt you have much more up your sleeve, so on that note please continue.
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9
Oh, good. XDD I find myself quite unable to stop, such as refreshing the Draco/Harry section five times every fifteen minutes to see if anything by you has been updated yet.
I absolutely adored this chapter. The fight went down brilliantly, and what happened afterwards absolutely stunned me. Poor Rodrigo, though. XD By this time I'm sure you know you're stuck with me, so I'll be around the next time you update.
Oh, good. XDD I find myself quite unable to stop, such as refreshing the Draco/Harry section five times every fifteen minutes to see if anything by you has been updated yet.
I absolutely adored this chapter. The fight went down brilliantly, and what happened afterwards absolutely stunned me. Poor Rodrigo, though. XD By this time I'm sure you know you're stuck with me, so I'll be around the next time you update.
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job. Although I must say, saw this conclusion coming. Thank you for posting once more.
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Touche and as of this moment in battle is so on! Please continue.
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff nice to see it so soon too. I'm quite excited about the next chapter. I feel kinda bad for the spanish Auror who name i am afraid to spell.