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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11
Yes, don't fall into the trap that I have. x3 Writing dozens of stories, but never finishing them. Or, leaving the fandom altogether and coming back two and a half years later, and finishing them then. Bad idea, I can promise you. ;;
This chapter made me gwee. All I can think of is Pat Benatar's "Love is a Battlefield" >3<
Yes, don't fall into the trap that I have. x3 Writing dozens of stories, but never finishing them. Or, leaving the fandom altogether and coming back two and a half years later, and finishing them then. Bad idea, I can promise you. ;;
This chapter made me gwee. All I can think of is Pat Benatar's "Love is a Battlefield" >3<
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay i like possessive draco
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #10...
You don't have to respond....
1. I think basically this was a filler chapter, soo...I'll tell you what I felt.
I'm glad they were able to get a couple of things out the way, but I'm glad Draco wasn't trying to be overbearing just to get his way, but see where this might go. Also, I have to admit I like it when you end chapters on a sweet note.
I think you're slowly getting a knack for it. :-)
2. That comment about me seeing myself as Draco is deeply scary, considering that I write Harry a lot more easily.
-hmm...well, it all depends on how you see Draco. Despite how he is portrayed in
the books, it's his personality/character that you might be able relate to, not
his ''mean'' way of doing things, I hesitate to say ''nasty''.
For me, it would be his poise, bluntness, aloofness and analytical thinking of how
to go about doing things. As for Harry, he WOULD be easier to write, since he is
the do-gooder. All you have to do is write...what would be the right way of doing certain things and take it from there, that's just a POV statement.
Anyway, any questions I have will be asked for next time.
You don't have to respond....
1. I think basically this was a filler chapter, soo...I'll tell you what I felt.
I'm glad they were able to get a couple of things out the way, but I'm glad Draco wasn't trying to be overbearing just to get his way, but see where this might go. Also, I have to admit I like it when you end chapters on a sweet note.
I think you're slowly getting a knack for it. :-)
2. That comment about me seeing myself as Draco is deeply scary, considering that I write Harry a lot more easily.
-hmm...well, it all depends on how you see Draco. Despite how he is portrayed in
the books, it's his personality/character that you might be able relate to, not
his ''mean'' way of doing things, I hesitate to say ''nasty''.
For me, it would be his poise, bluntness, aloofness and analytical thinking of how
to go about doing things. As for Harry, he WOULD be easier to write, since he is
the do-gooder. All you have to do is write...what would be the right way of doing certain things and take it from there, that's just a POV statement.
Anyway, any questions I have will be asked for next time.
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This looks promising, as they attempt to be patient with each other, even willing to try to start over again. I believe that they would make each other alot more than merely content. I look forward to your next chapter. Hopefully with some more zestful moments ahead. So by all means please continue!
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I have just spent the last hour devouring its chapters and giggling myself silly. I beg an update from you and wait for it with abated breath.
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job. I really liked the tree reference at the end of this chapter. I found myself visualizing it clearly in my mind.
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I soooo need chapter 11!!! Harry agreed to date him? This I can't wait to read!!!
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10
Intoxicate the Sun already sounds like it's going to be fantastic. Aside from the fact that you're writing it, and based on your previous fanfics, which have all be among the best I've ever read, you're a brilliant writer, and just that tantalising little hint in the review comments about leading a revolution and with a name like Intoxicating the Sun, I know it's going to be wonderful.
I honestly can't wait.
This chapter has already slipped away from me, mostly due to circumstances that happened before I sat down to read it, so I can't recall anything particularly witty or intriguing that I wanted to pull out and comment upon, so I'm afraid you'll have to make do with a 'this chapter was fantastic, and I can't tell you how much I'm looking forward to the next one.'
Intoxicate the Sun already sounds like it's going to be fantastic. Aside from the fact that you're writing it, and based on your previous fanfics, which have all be among the best I've ever read, you're a brilliant writer, and just that tantalising little hint in the review comments about leading a revolution and with a name like Intoxicating the Sun, I know it's going to be wonderful.
I honestly can't wait.
This chapter has already slipped away from me, mostly due to circumstances that happened before I sat down to read it, so I can't recall anything particularly witty or intriguing that I wanted to pull out and comment upon, so I'm afraid you'll have to make do with a 'this chapter was fantastic, and I can't tell you how much I'm looking forward to the next one.'
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I laughed my ass off at your reply to a comment.... "yes because Harry is dumb." And that sums him up perfectly... and when he's pissed off he's even more dumb and he exacts vengeance like a woman.lol
loved it more please... more sex... ohhh love draco
loved it more please... more sex... ohhh love draco
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo sooooo need chapter 10!!!