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Thank you for updating once more, excellent job as usual. Loved the debate in general. Please update again when you have the chance.

Another nice one, especially since Draco managed to play off Hermione's emotions rather nicely. After all to win so easily would dull the victory for either of them. Harry is a major part of this debate despite his attempts to remain neutral. I look forward to Harry finding what Draco's reaction is to where their having dinner soon, lol! I think Draco has finally gotten a clue that this is one person who will not be coerced into his way of doing things. In fact I bet Draco needs someone like Harry to tell him off when he gets out of hand. Bravo to you for this fine tale of yours, and keeping me coming back for more. So please continue.

about #14...

you know, if I had Draco's quick keen mind...I would be cutting a LOT of arrogant people to the quick, especially managers who don't deserve respect. Of course,
doing it in a way they wouldn't know they were being put down...until much later.

:-)

Also, Draco sure does remind me of a peacock trying to show off for its mate, which
he is...'Look at me, see how I shine!'

By the way, hasn't Hermione forgot about...FREEDOM of CHOICE or has she become
blinded by her self-righteous crusade, without thinking about what it is that
others want???

Even though, they are creatures...of the intelligent sort, of course.

about #13...

As ''short'' as this chapter seemed, I got the impression that Draco WAS trying
to impress Harry with his words, hope it doesn't backfire on him.

By the way, from what I've seen of your stories so far & regarding this chapter
you haven't done a story on Draco trying to get Harry's attention [in a funny way]that wasn't a one-shot, at least as far as I've seen.

Soooo need chapter 14!!! I loved Draco's responses to Hermione!

Excellent. I can't wait for the continuation of the debate between Hermione and Draco. I'm sure that the ending will reveal a few traits of his to Harry that should be fairly enlightening. Thank you for posting.

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I like seeing this side of Draco. I hope he is worthy of Harry's love.

Hermione knows how hard Harry's life has been in the past, and wants to protect her friend, who is more like a brother to her, but sometimes you have to learn when its time to step aside and just hope for the best. In spite of all he's endured Harry is a survivor, and has learned when to follow his instincts, and when to turn to his friends, if only for moral support and understanding. Draco has difficult times ahead if she manages to put a wedge between them, but Harry needs to see for himself just how much Draco is committed to their budding relationship. Near the end of this chapter Draco actually strengthened his position with Harry and Hermione by allowing his vunerable side to show through, as that gave testament to his struggle to surmount his past history with them and the world in general. Harry wanted to see if Draco was sincere in his new found beliefs, but how much more satisfying to be part of that process as his life partner at his side. Draco is finally beginning to understand just how much of rut he was in before Harry entered his life, and now is finding that going beyond his previous comfort zone can make the everyday experiences renewed and invigorating again. Its a pure pleasure to read this wonderous tale of yours. You are a master storyteller, and have me yearning for more, so please continue.

I actually took the time to play some harp music as I read during the part of them being so close together in the music room, even as the first bondaries were set and almost crossed before they parted once more. Clearly you have a gift for wording an image that is fully enjoyed by this reader. Thank you. It is also a pleasure to view a turning point in their relationship as they are finally coming together as equals. Both will find life much more fullfilling that way, as each has gifts within themselves worth a lifetime of sharing together. I look forward to your next chapter, so please continue.