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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #33...
Child!!! I thought fo' sho' you were going to reach through the computer
and smack me upside the head for asking! I was like, ''I can't BELIEVE
I'm saying this.''
NOW, what has really grabbed my attention is the tone of this chapter. It
has a...mature feel to it. In other words, it's in the way Harry is acting
with Draco, now that he is with him and it's in the way Draco is carrying
himself when he's with others, even Harry, like a true aristocratic heir.
Get what I mean?
It's almost like ''watching'' the day-in-the-life of two men, with an
irritating subject thrown in the mix.
You have to admit Hermione & her pursuit for FREEEDOOOM of the house elves
is kinda grating on the nerves. :-) So, I'm feeling Draco, she needs to give
it a rest.
Besides, WILL she see the benefits of having house elves and admit such a thing?
How long will this story be? Just wondering...
Child!!! I thought fo' sho' you were going to reach through the computer
and smack me upside the head for asking! I was like, ''I can't BELIEVE
I'm saying this.''
NOW, what has really grabbed my attention is the tone of this chapter. It
has a...mature feel to it. In other words, it's in the way Harry is acting
with Draco, now that he is with him and it's in the way Draco is carrying
himself when he's with others, even Harry, like a true aristocratic heir.
Get what I mean?
It's almost like ''watching'' the day-in-the-life of two men, with an
irritating subject thrown in the mix.
You have to admit Hermione & her pursuit for FREEEDOOOM of the house elves
is kinda grating on the nerves. :-) So, I'm feeling Draco, she needs to give
it a rest.
Besides, WILL she see the benefits of having house elves and admit such a thing?
How long will this story be? Just wondering...
schedule
May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 17!!! What is Draco about to tell her?
schedule
May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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you just had to end it there! didn't you!!!
hahaha
what a cliffy... *pouts* so unfair...
i really look forward to what hermione has to say to draco.
and i'm so proud of him. he's finally learning!! yay!
i bet harry is happy bout that too : )
i look forward to your next chapter.
cant wait!!
you just had to end it there! didn't you!!!
hahaha
what a cliffy... *pouts* so unfair...
i really look forward to what hermione has to say to draco.
and i'm so proud of him. he's finally learning!! yay!
i bet harry is happy bout that too : )
i look forward to your next chapter.
cant wait!!
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #15...
Alright dammit!!! Don't laugh when I mention this...but this chapter brought
out questions. Now I don't ask intimate questions of folks, BUT...do most
people DROOL when they have sex??? I would think you'd be SOMEwhat self-concious
about how much liquid is coming out of your mouth.
Also, this chapter, I dunno...FEELS like it was written from experience *hint..hint*
as opposed to someone who just knows how write a good sex scene.
*sigh* okay...OKAY, I'll get off THAT subject.
All in all, this WAS damn good! I like how they ''gave'' themselves to each
other, without a worry of what the other thought...just sincere, intense emotion.
nuff said... :-)
Alright dammit!!! Don't laugh when I mention this...but this chapter brought
out questions. Now I don't ask intimate questions of folks, BUT...do most
people DROOL when they have sex??? I would think you'd be SOMEwhat self-concious
about how much liquid is coming out of your mouth.
Also, this chapter, I dunno...FEELS like it was written from experience *hint..hint*
as opposed to someone who just knows how write a good sex scene.
*sigh* okay...OKAY, I'll get off THAT subject.
All in all, this WAS damn good! I like how they ''gave'' themselves to each
other, without a worry of what the other thought...just sincere, intense emotion.
nuff said... :-)
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, man that was so smmokin' hawt! Gotta give it to you because that was the moment we've all been waiting for, and you made it well worth the wait. Please continue to show us all why this tale of yours is one of the best examples of what slash is all about. Hot boys, and even hotter moments in or out of the bedroom.
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH that was fantastic!! I sooo can't wait for chapter 16!!!
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a beautiful coupling
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May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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HOT!!!!!!!!!
That must've been the hottest sex scene i've read in a long while haha : )
excellent writing!!
and draco didnt even touch it once... haha I laughed at that.
cant wait for when morning comes...the aftermath
looking forward to the next chapter!
HOT!!!!!!!!!
That must've been the hottest sex scene i've read in a long while haha : )
excellent writing!!
and draco didnt even touch it once... haha I laughed at that.
cant wait for when morning comes...the aftermath
looking forward to the next chapter!
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 15!!! They have given themselves to the other. Wow!
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!
goodness, i cannot wait to see what happens next!
is draco now one step closer to harry...?
well of course!! hahaha
cannnot wait for the next chapter! really, really looking forward to it!
goodness, i cannot wait to see what happens next!
is draco now one step closer to harry...?
well of course!! hahaha
cannnot wait for the next chapter! really, really looking forward to it!