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by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I sooo hope Narcissa comes around!!! I need chapter 19 please!!!
person butterpie
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good ending of this story, but clearly not the end for these two as they will continue to grow through life sharing all that they are together- the good and the bad. The times ahead will certainly not be dull. Their family, friends and the rest of the world may never accept their relationship, but the happiness and contentment found between them is worth everything to them. I look forward to seeing more of your fertile imagination in the future, so on that note please continue to entertain us all like the star that you are!
person butterpie
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent, especially when Harry countered Flint with his own words, good on him. Draco finally has someone who is more than worthy of his respect and love. I'm sorry to see this nearing the end, but you have made it a journey of two hearts that were meant to be together like yin and yang- separate and indivdual yes, but oh so equal to each other. Thank you, and as always please continue to write on.
person SP777
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about 17...

The most effective response from Draco would have been, ''I'm SOOO hot for
you right now.'' But, I guess the kiss was a'ight. :-) *looks away innocently*


a'ight=alright [just in case you didn't know]
person Juana13
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH HELL YEAH!!!!
wait to go Harry!!
hahahahahaha!!!
man, that was amazing!! he kicked flint's ass! hahaha : )
loved this chapter. really proves just how much draco really loves harry and also of how much harry has matured and learned.
i'm so glad you wrote this chapter.
it really made me smile : )
looking forward to the next chapter.
so sad that this story has to end so soon though.... : (
well, it was great while it lasted.
cant wait for the next update!
person samanthawood89
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Simply amazing.
person polka dot
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping Harry would kick a little pureblood ass, but this was still fun.
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was perfect!!! I soooo need chapter 18!!!!
person polka dot
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very sweet story, but the smut was great!
person butterpie
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So house elfs promote a sense of all is right in the wizarding world so long as they continue to provide service to their owners. That is an interesting point of view, but will that simply give Hermione more ammo to continue her own outlook on this situation? At least Draco is beginning to reconsider his opinion of Hermione and Ron as being incapable of change themselves, and that is very refreshing indeed. Harry himself seems happy that his chosen partner is making an attempt to adjust his behavior for the sake of peace knowing that Harry will not be content with anything less from him. Sounds like some interesting times ahead for all of them. Please continue to delight us all.