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for Lamia's Lament

by Yokailover

person kawaiiyashie
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. hehe yes have severus go into a mating frenzy with harry to rub it in dumbledorks face. hehe well i cant wait for the next chapter do update soon.
person Nanashi20
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH Oh oh Cliff hangers I hate them... You are doing so well on this story that I can hardly wait for the next chapter. This is so great. More soon please
person kunitsu
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I like the fact that Severus is now awake. I cant wait to see how they will escape from Dumbledore
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay I admit, I'm interested. But a little creeped out too. >.> more?
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!! Glad to see you continuing! I like the fact that you are steadily progressing Snape and Harry's discoveries, and I can't wait to find out who Poppy went to for help. Looking forward to next time!!
person Selera
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohh me likey! ^^
person Kaen
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
evil plan! :O
person Dark Disaster
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far. Please keep updating.
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is much better than the original, a lot better. The story feels more consistent and there is a more real approach with the characters. Please do update soon, though I don't see why Snape must be rescued instead of awaken by the faculty.
person mls1971
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read more of this story!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!!