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for Lamia's Lament

by Yokailover

person alma
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!
person alma
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
looking good!
person kunitsu
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I just love where this is going. I just wonder what side Minerva will choose
person aki
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really like the story. just a question though. if harry is to mate with both snape and voldemort, than shouldn't this be under the section "threesomes/moresomes" instead of "harry/snape"? because its quite misleading.
person mls1971
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, like the idea immensely :D Hope you keep up posting^^
person faith B
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooohh
I cant wait for more
please update soon!!
I cant wait to see who Harry will end up mating with!!
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Any chance of a Harry/Voldemort/Sev threesome???
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
While the idea behind this story is fascinating, you fail to maintain a continuous structure, which makes for incredibly difficult reading. Please, choose whether Harry is telling the story ("I...") or the story is being told about Harry ("he...") when you change that within the middle of paragraphs and even sentences, it is extremely bothersome.
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and can't wait until the next chapter. Although, could you please not make it a threesome with voldemort I mean I love that pairing normally but I would like to see it be just Severus and Harry together. It's just a suggestion you don't have to do it. Keep up the good work. ^_^