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for Paralyzer

by THEleprechaun

schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Don't worry, you'll get over your writer's block soon. You made me want cappuccino.
person christis
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter..*hugs murray* sorry you had such a crap time darling...hope Blondie is taking extra special care of you...hugs to all...take care
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hope you had fun! Love the chapter. I'll review again when I'm in a better frame of mind.
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No throwing things at you, but thanks for leaving the note. :)
person Myt
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Argh! You damn tease!
You and Draco, both.
Ok, ok... not exactly, no... but still...
Update! Yes. I'm liking your characters.
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww man some good hotness! I'm not usually one for the Draco/Harry pairing because usually I can't help but imagine the actors that portray the characters in the same position but I didn't in the scene where Draco goes down on Harry. I missed chapter seven so I was glad I could read that and eight at the same time!

I'm loving this fic and I hope you update soon I want to see some threesome action....LMAO!

Well done.
person christis
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! that was so hot! thank you darling...loved it! can't wait for the next chapter...hope Maeve and Julius are recovering from their chicken pox experience...more importantly, hope you and Blondie are recovering from their chicken pox experience...hugs and loves to all of you...take care ;-)
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are brillant, murray! Guh...*faints from hotness overload*
person christis
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
**hugs Murray and babies,calamine lotion and all** glad to hear they're feeling a little bit better...ah, sexual tension...gotta love it...but no fair leaving us hanging...**bats eyes** please don't make me hold my breath like last time as lack of oxygen wouldn't be conducive to me as I'm working on a new story **smiles bashfully** anyway, lovely chapter and I'm ssoo looking forward to some Harry/Draco smut? **hint hint wink wink** more hugs...oh, and enjoy a bit of that cake for me please darling...loves to you all...'til next time...take care
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! Harry needs to get over his possessiveness of Ginny and just let the three of them get down to some serious shagging, because anyone with half a brain could tell he wants Draco, too. Besides that, who wouldn't? Helga cracks me up! Robert's head banging routine made me smile. He needs to stop being so negative. He'll give himself gray hair, and he's far too handsome for that. How are your babies? I hope they feel better soon.