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for Wanting and Kneading

by Digitallace

schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh man are you really leaving it there?! oh please continue it!
person Juana13
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*glares* you could've at least put a sex scene in there... *pouts*
but besides that, this story was amazing. really funny. "MEOW" hahahaha : )
cant wait for you to write more amazing stories!
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
why'd u cut it?? i wanna read more!!!!
great great amazing chapter, and i want more!!!
-Kyle
person DHnotHD
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh this is looking really good, can't wait for part 2 (and keeping my fingers crossed for top!Draco ;-)
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh man! I WANT! please. gah! just the thought of those two all oiled up! *sighs dreamily*
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:)

delicious!!

person ThePinkLady
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice start! Please keep writing :)
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooo can't wait for chapter 2!!!!
person Toddy
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought you had misspelt the title, but now I find you have not - great start - cann you not make it longer than just two episodes, please?
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
as always, wonderful! and i love the title heheh very cute