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for Not All that Glitters is Gold

by ricerabbit

schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story all the way from the beginning and I absolutely love it!! This is a great story so far and i cant wait to read your next update!
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey ricerabbit,
thanks for the online nod and I loved the chapter I loved the foreplay between hermione and lucius and the fact that she still has her fire and fight left in her, I love lucius practised domination but I dont see hermione giving in to draco or caring for him in any way or format he is just too volemortish in his cruelties it would be wierd if she just develops feelings for him. Please keep up the good work and update soon.

Respect
Scarlet
person jacqui
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Any idea how many chapters this story will have? I like what you have so far. And I agree, I prefer a defiant Hermione with some fight in her.
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Stockholm Syndrome maybe but not after chapter 6 it would be suicide and dumb for her to feel anything but hate for him. I loved how u are putting the various POVs and I am glad we got to read from his POV but still he is an idiot he raped her again. The boy is mad and I like your explaination of him that he tired of living shadows well to me he put himself there. And I love, love that there is no cover for hermione's mouth even though she will be severely punished, and draco is just weak when he is raping her cause thats the only way that he will get some fear out of her. But please let hermione get justice in the end.

Respect
Scarlet
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yep, Draco's an asshole, raping bastard. No Stockholm Syndrome for Hermione, oh please. I'm finding it hard to see him as anything but the sadist he is. At least Lucius was semi-gentle. I would like to see what he's thinking. I think the elves are going to befriend our battered heroine.

Any chance for her to work on her wandless magic? Despite what they think she's very strong and powerful.
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i to have read that story "plaything" just recently in fact and it was a very good story and it was sad that it was never finished but I hope your story gets finished beacause I am liking it alot so far and I have only read the first chapter.
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so that was brutal last chapter, 3 chapters in and my head is spinning, its bloody sadistic, I love it, pplease keep it up and update soon.
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so this Draco has nothing redeemable about him AT ALL. what a bastard.
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesommmmme!