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Oh, I love this story :] And I love how they both are falling for her... in their own ways. Will they switch sides just to be with her? Hm, I wonder...


Well, lovely so far, please continue :]

-Eloquence

Okay - Lucius didn't even realize that he referred to her as everything but mudblood -- hmm, he's becoming obsessed and competitive. And he has the gall to yell at Draco? I wonder who Hermione actually prefers? I also wouldn't put it past Draco to try and kill Lucius. His comment about touching her though was foolish - come on, it's Lucius Malfoy. Poor Hermione needs a break though, she's lucky she can walk. She's been passed like a baton in a race for crying out loud. Well, I can't wait to see what happens.

well he's a masochist isn't he? he loves her, he hates her, he loves her and I think its easier for him to deal with her hating him. I'm curious to see how and where all this will play out especially after he let Ron and Harry go - will he confess to Hermione? how will he keep his lecherous father's hands off of her - he must HATE sharing her. oh and can we get Hermione some clothes? LOL - seriously.

Scheming Hermione is good but she should be careful to remember that all best laid plans could backfire.

OMGOMGOMGOMG this story is BRILLIANT. It is easily my favorite of the ones I'm reading. WOW. I am seriously enraptured by the story you are telling, the emotions warring within Hermione, the passionate intensity of Draco, the manipulation by Lucius...I just absolutely adore it. Keep up the amazing plot and descriptive writing! And the fantastic smut doesn't hurt either. :)

OMG FREAKING EXCELLENT. I looooved that Draco reacted with that kind of passion. I feel like you have created the scene inside Hermione's head so well! I really enjoyed the chapter, thanks!

Where's our next chapter :(

I'm sorry I've kept quiet for so long but thought I just HAD to compliment you on this fic. I LOVE it! I really really can't wait for the next chapter. I love how you've kept the characters true to form. The experienced Lucius knowing he would have to give her some level of care to get out of her what he wants, spoilt lil Draco being a dick but already beginning to craze her. And our heroine Hermione, as strong and resilient as ever. I commend you and can't wait for the next chapter :) So please don't be too long. :D
V xxx

Okay so Narcissa is gone. I was wondering because I can't imagine she would have been comfortable with what they were doing to Hermione, muggleborn or not. She's a young girl after all.

Lucius is a randy, dirty bastard isn't he? I do realize its all rape nonetheless but at least he's not beating the shit out of her. She hates it all its true. Right now I find Lucius to be very interesting - how he feels about Hermione, his station and position, his life, his son - he's a walking contradiction at times and not to be taken at face value.

Draco is just childish, churlish and mean. I don't see anything of value right now, beating a woman is just too much. He made her bleed and broke her bones and I don't know how she would ever forgive or forget that. I know, I know...wait and see, and I will but I just want to take a bottle to his face so badly (sorry I'm so violent). His comment about feeding her -- what did he think that she'd never eat?

Hermione needs a break and a bath for goodness sakes also. Give the girl some alone time. I was surprised she kept her eyes on Lucius, I would have expected her to slyly look around. I would like to know more of what she is forming in her head - she's still incredibly brilliant and I'm sure he wheels never stop turning.

FREAKING EXCELLENT. Every day this week I have looked forward to coming home to one of your delicious, salacious chapters! Thanks for never disappointing. :)