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for Not All that Glitters is Gold

by ricerabbit

person MegNutz
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dun dun duh!!! good chapter. sorry about ur things getting erased that sucks. hope the next chapter is up soon! can't wait
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, well Lucius I don't think you are going to win. What an asshole. I know Hermione is being devious but hopefully even she can see that Draco's feelings are genuine. For goodness sakes, can't Draco get the comeuppance on his father? Jeez, he's younger and faster. Enough with kicking Draco's ass.

Let's see where this goes.
person MegNutz
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
uh oh can't wait until the next chapter! keep up the good work.
person mhaj78
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think it seemed rushed at all! Very action-packed and definitely not what I expected, but still very good! Thanks for the update!21
person Coipje
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well well well Lucy is growing soft for our little Hermie :P
I like Draco
I love the story keep it up
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you love baccanahal eh, well I love it and I love this chapter lord the pulling and tuggin between father and son, lord I dont know what u were thinking but i love. That chapterwas hot and we have 2 very jealous and possessive malfoys and one question how is she able to taking all that fucking all the damn time. Its alot...lol. I really loved the part bout the weasleys that was hilarious really. and the sodomy was fun and I know i am perverted. Loved it love the dramaand all the smut.

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Scarlet
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dont care what u say, this draco is just to evil to be redeemable(stomps foot and pouts), i love her with lucius even though is not a better devil, he just the seemingly caring one at this point and he is the reason why she is alive. If it were up to draco he would torture her and kill her quickly. But it was another good chapter at lucius showing off his skills in seduction and taming hermione. You just love to put that girl in predicaments dont you.

Respect
scarlet
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey I was doing the jig knowing that lucius was rutting with her while draco was away, but the thing is whats with that kiss dudette? WTF
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
looks at rice rabbit like she has gone insane. What the hell was that, have u lost your marbles, why, oh lord why...rolls on floor and throws tantrum... I know she is probably using him to the advantage but lord....things detoriate so quickly and poor fred and george.
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is soo good...I'm just now getting into it but I love the competition between draco and lucius for hermione...i think its great and i cant wait to read your next update...