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for Not All that Glitters is Gold

by ricerabbit

schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dear this cliffhanger is a killer.. WOW!!!! Please more soon. ty
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
anger, anger, anger, how could she be so dumb as to get caught again, and harry couldnt he just listen to draco and take her idiots. Brilliant chapter and i pissed, lucius should kill her for her stupidity...sigh and draco i think only has one get-out-of-death card and he used that already. I smell a shit load of trouble. Update soon.

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Scarlet
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lucius underestimates Hermione's will. That's his problem. She can fake what she needs too - sex might be great and might give her orgasms but it's still rape and it's still forced. He's not gentle or kind.

Draco: do something damn it!
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*drops dead on floor* i swear when it comes to this fic u go bananas.
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Draco isn't dead and he better man up, get his girl and kill the villian he calls dad.

person mag7ical
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's so wrong but I can't help but want Draco & Hermione to get together .. even after what he did. I guess you accomplished your goal then, huh? ;)
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha i just finished reading Chapter 11 and i can't go any farther because i have to tell you that this is FREAKING RIDICULOUS!! Like...AMAZING RIDICULOUS lol!! Draco and Lucius are fighting over Hermione!?!? This is waaay wayyyy too good!! I've never read anything like it in my life. It's so original, and well crafted, you even make Draco and Lucius' actions understandable by the way you describe their thoughts. UNBELIEVABLE. BRAVO. I bet I don't even have to mention what a great writer you are, I'm sure you already know. You write one fine, imaginative fic. And still ON TOP of all that this is just out right crazyness!!!! haahhaha, i love it.
person MegNutz
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great job can't wait till the next chapter
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WoW!!!! He does love her... Magnificent... PLEASE MORE MORE MORE
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you i have to compliment u ricerabbit from your first story u ever posted to reading this one now you definately grown in such a short time and I commend u on that cuz u have so many fics all at once going and u post up on all, u have a large following already and u are learning and adapting your writing well. *pats on back* Now to the chapter I loved how u made this one I have to say it is my favourite out of the bunch, but how did they find out about draco and hermione, did she willingly tell them or what? I was just curious about that. I loved how hermione tried to distance herself from him but i know she loves him, I love how this story has progressed. He has to pay for what he has done, as I myself called him unredeemable in the past as u can remember, and I dont think u should make it easy on him...lol. but I do love draco but he has to grow up and become a man. And I must applaud u again for making harry so perfect and exactly what harry should be like, smart, calculating and still trying see all points. I cant wait for next chapter, poor hermione her mind must be a mess now. Keep up the great work and update soon.

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Scarlet