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More, More, More!!!! I need more. Excelent narative and I like your descriptions. There was a little too much information about the spells in the book, which was a bit confusing but all in all it was a great read. I look forward to the next instalment!!

Great story, but I think you could have gone further with it. But if this length works for you, who am I to say differently? Excellent writing and I can't wait to read more of your work.

If this is your first ever, be proud. This was rather captivating and I am looking forward to more. But it also is very well written, something not always true. You had good tone and setting and the pace was well done, not too rushed not to wordy. Good job, looking forward to more of your work.

Fantastic! I laughed out loud at several of the more humorous bits in your story; however, you simply must continue. That's my only complaint. We all know that Hermione's curiosity will inevitably lead to her trying out the spell/potion. I imagine Severus will be aware of its effects and chaos will ensue. This needs to be continued!!!

I enjoyed it and would love to see more. The fact that it was Romilda's mum who owned the book made perfect sense in a horribly canon way, and you can't help but wonder what else the girl may have gleaned from it besides the love potions she dosed the chocolates with. Nicely done.

I really liked this and would love to read more of it. Great job, and I look forward to seeing you write more stories. You definately have potential. =)