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Absolutely love it!!! Please update soon!!

good story, still feel bad for ron, and letting girlfreind keep secrect is being a good boyfriend.

Hi, don't take down the first Chapter yes it is intense but it is imporant to the story, like he was not spitting on her to be cruel but to get her wet. Like when I first was reading it I thought he was so mean, but from reading more chapters you can see he loves her and is trying to convince her even though she wants him to be dominant of her. 50 shades of grey be damned. Write a book honey, ill buy it. And keep on writing

Emilie

Oh man, I love this story. I remember it from quite a long time ago, and am glad you are working on it again. I personally loved the first chapter, and think it really works well as an intro, but I can see why you would want to take it down, as many people might stop reading right there and not find the wonderful story that follows. Please keep writing, I am on the edge of my seat!

I love this story! The first chapter was disturbing and I almost didn't continue, but I'm glad I did. I don't think you should take down the first chapter. It was intense and well-written. But maybe you could write a note in the beginning telling people that not all is as it seems and they should keep reading. Can't wait for more!

Thank you for posting a new chapter!
I think the story has taken a different route after the first chapter. The character personalities are changing...especially Hermione's. Although I like the first chapter for its intensity, I don't think it fits with the current plot direction. Perhaps an edit is in order instead of taking it down completely. If you were to have Hermione's reaction to the situation be less violated, I think it can work. I think she would be more willing. Even though she's being punished in a sadistic way, she feels she deserves it. Don't you think that she would view the situation less like she's being raped and more that she's receiving appropriat punishment (in her mind) for what she's done? I'm not saying she should get off on what Malfoy does to her...but, maybe she would feel a sense of relief or peace knowing that the sexual domination is allowing her to make amends.
I love the story!! It's such an interesting plot and I'm so glad you're continuing with it!! xoxo SM

Great story! I love your Draco and Hermione. Keep on writing please!!

I was skeptical when I first started reading because I don't particularly like sadistic Draco. However, I kept reading and am now RIVETED. I thoroughly enjoy the storyline and want to know more! The naughty bits are especially entertaining. Please continue!! xoxo SM

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Forgive my excitement. But, you're back, you're back, you're back!!!

You'd better finish this story.

That was awesome hotness :) cannot wait to read more love.

Em