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August 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! My mind has been blown away by this story. I hope you eventually continue it.
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December 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story makes my heart hurt. It really shows the damage that being raised in certain types of belief systems can cause people. Hermione is just sad to look at in this story and is warped enough that she could not control her animal instincts when they had come out (which is what religious repression tends to do) and so harsh that she cannot forgive or understand herself or others. This is not how I imagine canon Hermione at all but it is an interesting and well-done story.
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November 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is incredible, it's so strange yet so much more realistic then any of the fics I've read. I think that Hermione, although a tad ooc, is acting quite closely to how many traumatized teenage girls might react. Draco breaks my heart here and I really jusr want him to be happy, which isn't a reaction I usually have to any fic so I guess congrats for breaking my heart? Don't really like the relationship between Ginny and Hermione but it's not absolutely horrible so I guess I'm alright with it. Sorry. I just like Ginny. But your Harry and Ron are a real nice piece. Pretty much in character, fron what I remember, Harry is a bit too dense and unobservant but still pretty good. The whole way you handle these dark themes arw incredible and it's just great. I actually don't know what to say.
The only thing I dislike about the story so far is the fact that Hermione is cheating. Cheating is a big no for me, and I understand, here, that she's just trying to survive but it's still unpleasant.
But the point is, this fic is wonderful and I really like the way you write. Hope you're not too sick or anything, and thank you for putting this story up :) Really hoping you haven't gotten stuck or anything like that cos I'm so looking forward to reading more! And I'm really sorry for writing a whole bloody essay, or if I offended you at any point, (I just wanted to express what I felt, and hopefully it's constructive?) and correct me if I misunderstood anything. Thanks again, for writing this.
- Kaela
The only thing I dislike about the story so far is the fact that Hermione is cheating. Cheating is a big no for me, and I understand, here, that she's just trying to survive but it's still unpleasant.
But the point is, this fic is wonderful and I really like the way you write. Hope you're not too sick or anything, and thank you for putting this story up :) Really hoping you haven't gotten stuck or anything like that cos I'm so looking forward to reading more! And I'm really sorry for writing a whole bloody essay, or if I offended you at any point, (I just wanted to express what I felt, and hopefully it's constructive?) and correct me if I misunderstood anything. Thanks again, for writing this.
- Kaela
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October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg I freaking love this story please continue writing the chapters please date soon!!!
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November 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I just discovered it but pleeeeease keep posting.
I really like how you portrait Draco, he's been through a lot but he's capable of forgiving. Hermione, I just don't know what to think, she's so confused and so angry with herself that I'm scared of what she might do, but I know that Draco can help her, heal her. Please update it soon!!! =)
I really like how you portrait Draco, he's been through a lot but he's capable of forgiving. Hermione, I just don't know what to think, she's so confused and so angry with herself that I'm scared of what she might do, but I know that Draco can help her, heal her. Please update it soon!!! =)
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October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm SOOO glad you're back! The story is getting even more interesting ... Don't stop!
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October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is great!! is there going to be more?
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October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So nice to see an update! Welcome back Betty Silks, can't wait for more. Don't take the chapter down, love it.
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September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So glad you are updating this! I can't wait to find out what happened with Hermione and the malfoys-- I just can't believe she'd murder someone in cold blood.