schedule
March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my, but this was fun -- you need to write more in this vein. However you may wish to fix your paragraph breaks. There don't seem to be any spaces betwixt the paragraphs.
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm i wasn't real sure if i liked this at first but i really think i do. I liked the idea of bad boy snape rather than the usual 'i was so abused oh woe is me' snape. and the tattooed junk food junkie thing was kinda cute. Interesting story.