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This is quite a good story. One of my favorite oairings is Lumione and I really enjoy LM/SS/HG stories, there is a really good chemistry between those three characters. (My actual favorite pairing is SS/LM...but reading them as best friends is nearly as good.) Are you still updating this? I'd love to know what happens next. That is one thing about AFF, it is awfully hard to tell what is compelete on here or not. I usually don't read WIPs and I got into this and really liked it and then...ahhh! Nothing! I do hope you continue it. It's git a great premise and I'd like to see Rita and Pelgram get their come-uppance.'

Clare

Great story, I hope you update soon

I am really hoping that you will update your stories. I started reading them on FF and fell in love with them.

Last Exit to Eden is one of my favorite LM/HG stories and it got me hooked on Dirty Little Secret and Sins of the Father. I hope that you will decide to update as you are now listed on a site that regulates the age of it's readers so that you can post all the lovely yumminess of Lucius Malfoy!

Excellent story, I love how you portray Harry & Ron and I can't wait to see Hermione as the Lady to match Lucius. I hope you will update soon..76

Excellent! You need to write much more of this. I like seeing Skeeter getting her comeuppance....

This is a wonderful story. It's a shame you seem to have abandoned it. If you ever decide to continue it. PLEASE let me know.

Ooh, this is a fabulous fic. The only criticism I have is that Lucius didn't present the power argument to Hermione when trying to persuade her into bed. The characterization vs. plot creates some dissonance during the exposition. Skeeter being related to her boss and Skeeter's campaign provides laughs. I like that you don't feel compelled to explain what happens every moment of every day, but jump several weeks at a time. I also like that Kingsley is neither good nor bad. Harry Potter a has-been! Hah! That's great.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!! i so want lots more!!!! please post soon and let us know what is going to happen to all of them and you can make this story long really long if you can! i totally would love to have seen at least one or more the socical things they went to! :)
small little thing though you miss labeled your chapters because there is no four. just taught i would let you know! :)
PLEASE post soon! :)

Again, an interesting take on postwar wizarding society. I assume all of Pegram's female 'help' were either half-blood or Muggleborn? Because Hermione's memories could be used as evidence by a disgruntled Mrs. Marchbanks, I think, even in a wizarding court. Looking forward to your next installment. :D

I can tell you that I am impresed... I just need some butt whipping in here... Starting with Ron/Harry/Rita/and Hermione former boss.... Please update soon this is getting good.. Lourdes