rate_review Reviews

Lovely!!! I can soo imagine the wedding., haha the look upon Ron's face when he wakes up haha Lovely! a part of me begs for a chapter two, but the logical part of my brain says this is a wonderful standalone. Good Job Dear!

aw as if she didnt discover that Draco was the best shag she had had in her life and decide that she couldnt put up with boring mediocre sex with Ron!! haha, besides that, good job.. and few grammar errors but nothing huge.
I was a bit confused about the speech marks though, they should be "..." rather than

This was a good story. I noticed they didn't use any protection; it would be interesting for her to be pregnant by Draco....I don't know. Just kind of throwing that out there.

That was actually rather realistic. Of course in fandom you'd want them to run off together or at the very least promise to meet again despite their marital status and I must admit, I was thinking if Hermione had any doubts she should turn and run in the other direction but I could actually see where she was coming from in wanting to stay with Ron, as if Draco had actually helped her make the decision she couldn't make for herself. Nicely done! :)