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for Some Things Change

by LiteraryBeauty

person Robs
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear Skeeter! I hope she doesn't print any more lies about the triad, because I think Hermione might get more than annoyed a second time! I wonder what she and Draco are going to do with their time now they no longer have a job...hmm...sex? xD Just my wishful thinking, LOL. Look forward to the next chapter!
person MegNutz
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh god drama drama drama!!! well not that skeeter didn't deserve it anyways cause of course she does!!! can't wait for the next chapter and hope that its soon! you know I love this story to bits. also is there going to be another bit with thello and his triad? hope so! can't wait
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this comes with a twist! Nice, unexpected but nice... More please!
person Robs
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay, they've gone public! Not in a very nice way though. I think it was a bit harsh firing them, but I can understand why Lucius did it. And, I don't mind the longer chapters xD Look forward to the next one!
person MegNutz
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
bravo!!! lol well another great chapter and can't wait for the next one! I think they made th right decision by coming out as a triad but then again when put in a situation like that what can u do? keep up the good work!
person Mia
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Despite the poise and grace of the previous chapters and their fascination to me, this chapter really feels like your story has come into its own here. It had me on edge and worried for a good part of it, and that nervousness has carried over into great anticipation of the next chapter. It seems that things will turn out to prove that the trio can hold their own. (Not intended as a pun. After all, that it what they have each other for, no?) When I was trying to think of what to call them, besides trio, I could only come up with terms that the press might use to show Hermione or the Malfoys in bad light. The Slytherin's trio, the Mlfoy's trio, the Death Eater's trio, the Second trio. I wonder how much will be focused on Hermione having been a part of a trio before, though not one of a sexual nature. I can hear the nastiness already. It makes me squirm happily for how you handle things so aptly.

~Mia

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person Elphaba
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh What a turn. Glad they came out in public! Now I want another chapter!
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your muse is going in rhe right direction.. But you know what we need more!
person VoraciousReader
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the subwoofer under the bed, LOL. Gotta try that! Nice characterization of Harry and Draco immediately seeing a way to make a game for wizards, and where has Draco seen a cheerleader?
person katiekrm
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Rosebush assassination. That was hilarious. I loved that whole conversation. Poor Crookshanks being left out in the cold. And the whole fingers interlocking as Hermione fell asleep. I can't wait to see where that goes. I love it when Harry and Hermione's friendship is so well portrayed. It just adds to an already great story. Harry often gets left out in the cold, too. At least he'd have Crookshanks.