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for Some Things Change

by LiteraryBeauty

person CoCoM
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch 17
Was very pleased to see an update! I am enjoying the developments between our triad. And I had a little fangirl giggle by Draco imagining Hermione "servicing" Lucius and trying to deny his interest. I am thoroughly looking forward to the smut chapter ahead! And just so I know, Lucius's swimming costume.....are we talking Daniel Craig type black, tight shorts? *drools* Oh, I am liking that A LO'!
person Darkephoenix
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I keep forgetting to review this. I know all about reviewers suddenly going "poof". I'll try to do better from here on out. I've thoroughly enjoyed this story so far and will be happy to see you continue it.
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
At least somebody has a sense of smutty honor around here...Many people make so many smut promises and it never happens. Great update on this story. I was hoping that Lucius was going to move his kisses a little further south but it seems that his hand did the trick. Go Hermione! She made that man lose control. That is the best part if you ask me. I loved the action and laughed when Draco popped up at the end. I love how you didn't turn it into this awkward thing with Draco being pissed that Hermione was sexing Lucius. You made it funny and I loved it. I'll be waiting for your next update, as always. Good luck my dear!
person Elphaba
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lost the review. Anyway Excellent story I love how you went about it. I can't wait to see how everyone responds to them being a Triad!
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. So funny there at the end.
person Robs
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE the Lucius smut! They are both being very gentlemanly, and I like that. Does the triad give them some innate knowledge of where they're partners are? I do keep wondering how Lucius and now Draco seem to know when Hermione is there. And, if the Lucius smut is that good,then I can't wait to see what the triad smut will be like! Look forward to the next chapter!
person MegNutz
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WELL shit that was hot if I do say so myself. another great chapter and can't wait for more! keep up the good work
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely Lucius smut! Agreeable, indeed!

It must be quite awkward for them to get things going, but once they got started...

Hermione's ability to do wandless magic already bodes well for post-trio-sex days. Love it!
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love when the real fun begins... Keep them coming...
person CoCoM
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! That was VERY nice! The whole naughtiness in the office thing was delicious (and of course Lucius would like things a bit rough!). Draco finding them and knowing exactly what they had been up to was classic. Can't wait to see all three of them in action! *giggle*