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for Breaking the Chain

by RynStar15

person Citten
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(teary eyed) boy that was just....devesating...to say the very least. well now everyone knows their depth that they shared. at least to some extent. poor sweet hermione, at least she has many people to be by her side. do post the next chapter soon! i am so very looking forward to how you will be writing this part (but you still have the other options! :) don't forget!) soon PLEASE!
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thr tissue alert was not enoughm this was very emotional... and the songs were very appropiate....
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is so emotionally heartbreaking! Is he really dead? Cant believe it! They've been through a lot from the beginning to the end. I cant bear to see them separated like this in the end.

Great writing! You got me crying there!
person Robs
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So sad! I still can't believe you've killed Draco off, but I suppose there's got to be a story that does every now and again. It doesn't take away from the awesomeness of your writing. Poor Hermione must feel so broken inside :[ I look forward to more.
person kazfeist
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, that was so sad! Beautifully done, though. :D
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was utterly heartbreaking =[
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
on chp. 17; hm, I'm not sure I understand this chapter. why does Hermione stand in for Alvida?
person subility
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok first off this isn't subility, just a friend. I cannot get enough of this story. I swear I check it 3 times a day to see if you have updated. You are a really talented writer, I can't wait to see what happens next!!
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope that's laughter in amusement and not laughing at how mad I actually am. LOL

Another angst filled, fly by the seat of your pants chapter. I'd love to see this as a movie - only I wouldn't know where to look because there would be so much action going on. Phew!!!! And for a second there when Lucius was saying not everything was as it seemed I actually thought he might have changed sides because of what Voldemort had done to his son but no, not this time. And oh, I didn't even think of going back for the time turner and saving Draco that way, not that doing so is a guaranteed save (and no, still not convinced he's actually dead). LOL Oh you killed Neville. Now I'm sad. I adore Neville. Oh well. Harry has won the war at such a cost, I'm having very mixed feelings about seeing the fallout now. Kudos to you, once again. :)
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please Please my Draco back.. somewhere somehow.. LOL