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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the alternate epilogue, too. Very nice tying up of loose ends. Am very happy with the progress of Penance and Second Time Around, too. :D
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm going to disregard the original epilogue & pretend like this is the real one. haha. I actually do like both versions. Great job on the story.
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DAMMIT! AGAIN YOU MADE ME CRY!
T_T It's so sad . . . but sweet . . .
Love it.
T_T It's so sad . . . but sweet . . .
Love it.
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this ending! Especially how they went back in time again. I liked the other one as well, just not as much as this one:)
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CH.22 I don't care if they are in a war, the Order is a bunch of a**holes for asking Hermione to do this. Sacrifice yourselves, scumbags. I loved the Ron line about repenting by doing the dishes. And then the explanation of the only reason they are there is b/c she sealed the door. A good place for some comic relief.
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely obsessed with this story. You take what is a "cliche" concept (although it's one of my favorites) and give it a refreshing and utterly brilliant twist. The characterizations are wonderful and I just love it. I love all of it.
By the way, it's such a huge compliment that you're enjoying Linger - thank you so much for the feedback on that. You have no idea how much it means to me. I will start Penance this weekend! Please write more. You're amazing.
By the way, it's such a huge compliment that you're enjoying Linger - thank you so much for the feedback on that. You have no idea how much it means to me. I will start Penance this weekend! Please write more. You're amazing.
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I had to create an account and delurk because YOU MADE ME CRY. And not even a little bit. Tissues were necessary. I hated the ending but I loved the story and you broke my heart with the last chapter, you really did. Well done!
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a great ending:) I was a little hesitant at first but the final chapter almost made me cry. I cannot wait for your next chapter in Penance!
By the way this is subility's friend;)
By the way this is subility's friend;)
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was amazing.
I actually bawled my eyes out, haha.
I don't like the fact that Draco died but it's somehow more real this way... not everyone survives and chances are we'll loose someone close to us. So it's bloody brilliant.
You wrote it amazingly and despite my one issue (Draco's death) I still love it.
Well done =]
I actually bawled my eyes out, haha.
I don't like the fact that Draco died but it's somehow more real this way... not everyone survives and chances are we'll loose someone close to us. So it's bloody brilliant.
You wrote it amazingly and despite my one issue (Draco's death) I still love it.
Well done =]
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my godd i cried and im not ashamed to admit it.. this was such a great story!! you dont even know. ahh im still crying doesnt seem fair but if i was in dracos position i would have done the same thing!
Now what I want to know is what the other endings were.. you should like write them anyways and have like alternate endings like some movies have.. so we know how the story would have ended if we picked one of the other choices!!
love it, definate classic now. xx
Now what I want to know is what the other endings were.. you should like write them anyways and have like alternate endings like some movies have.. so we know how the story would have ended if we picked one of the other choices!!
love it, definate classic now. xx