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for Breaking the Chain

by RynStar15

schedule August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. I have a stack of tissues on my desk and I love both endings. You are an amazing author. Thank you so much for writing and posting this for us to read.
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can not express to you the thanks I feel that you did the alternate ending! I was dying inside as I found out Draco was really dead! Great story, it was fun and I fully intend to read your other stuff when I get the time. *HUGS*
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Amazing, really, I'm in awe.
Everything fits perfectly: the plot, the characters, both endings (although I have to say the romantic in me preferred seeing them alive and happy in the end, I shed torrents of tears when I first finished the story)... You have a real talent, and for me it's a great pleasure to read your work. Thank you, very much, I'm looking forward to reading more of you :)
person Robs
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Really, really love the alternate ending! Personally I prefer that to the original ending, although the original ending was also good (as much as I didn't want Draco to die, I really did enjoy the story). This will definitely be a story that will be getting bookmarked for re-reading at some point! Keep up the good work!
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
To be honest with you I love the alternative more than the one you gave.. Please tissue alerts... But if I were you I will leave them both for future readers ..
person katiekrm
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry and cry when Draco died! I love Fred, but a Dramione is a Dramione! I love the second ending and I'm glad you had them visit the past again b/c I was missing those people. I totally did not even catch the "loves" as opposed to loved and I usually catch things like that! I think I was too disgruntled about how things were turning out. rofl I was still po'd about everyone being willing to sacrifice Hermione and her constantly being tortured and then to not have Draco on top of it?! And then I was so damn sad! I swear, you put my emotions through the gauntlet. I am so happy with the second ending. Great story!
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lovely -- I still wonder why she never used the time turner to save Draco like they did buckbeak.

thank you.
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohhh i loved it, but surprisingly i like the first ending more because its not ur usual draco/hermione fanfiction, its different. Which is good lol. I can't wait for any more stories u come out with !
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the second ending was a bit far fetched with the Fred thing but i loved it soo much more than the first ending mostly because Hermione and Draco are very much my OTP and can't really stand Hermione with anyone else in a fic that has been focusing on Draco and Hermione, and i really appreciate the time you put down to write this second ending because it really made this crappy day of mine much better:):):)...
person kazfeist
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done! You managed to tie in Fred's death in canon, as well. :D