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Great story so far!! I love the premise! It's very original.

I can't wait to see where this adventure leads them.

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Lady B*

Cute! I love it! I love the tangible chemistry between draco & heriome

Here's some more review love. LOL

Typical Draco, trying to put the blame on someone else. He knows damn well that she wouldn't put THAT kind of spell on him but I love it when his ego does the talking. LOL And I love how their rescuers can see a hell of a lot more than either Draco or Hermione can. I'm interested in exactly what this stone might be (besides a sign of trust) and what's going to happen to it afterwards. And since this is a time story, I can't wait to see whether our heroes are actually going to change history or let it play out as it should or ooooooooo my final guess they use the time turner to take Alvida to another time but everyone thinks she died in the fire. Can't wait to see how it goes. :)

I'd be stuffed going back to a time where we need horses to travel, I'm terrified of them but it was funny how Draco acted around them. I had visions of the typical 'I'm a man and I don't need to ask directions' expression cross my mind too. LMAO Loved the battle scene where the trackers caught up with them and how suddenly, because of the adrenaline rush I assume, that they could finally do wandless magic. That was brilliantly written, I felt like I was right there ducking and weaving and dodging spells too. Well done!! And the last paragraph where Draco was in awe of both her talent and the fact that she came back for him - perfect. I'm ready for the next chapter please. :)

hmmmm very interesting. its getting a lot better, i see. keep up the great work! wonder if draco and 'mione are gonna go further in their "relationship" during their trip... *wink*

Oh I definitely don't want you to give anything away. :) Sorry about the paragraph (though I'm glad you enjoyed it) but I was getting right into the story and I have this bad habit of surmising what's going to happen and if it turns out to be right - yay for me and if I'm wrong, well ususally it's a big laugh. LMAO Now you know what it's like to go to the movies with me. I always wonder out loud what's going to happen next. Scary huh!! Lucky my friends are used to my bad habit (s). LOL

OMG to be pinned against the tree (or anywhere else for that matter) kissing Draco - what's not to love? But he's going to fight himself the whole way isn't he? Hermione's the one who's willing to take the chance even though she's sure she's going to get hurt and she's going to do it anyway. Must be more of that Gryffindor courage coming out. :) Oh and did I mention the deliciousness of the 'being rough' part??? Squeeeeeeeeee!!!

Hurt me once, shame on you, hurt me twice, shame on me. Love that saying!!

Oh and here's another thought, her 'future' clothes weren't destroyed (don't know about Draco's). What happens if someone finds them in the outhouse? Is that significant??? (Don't answer, just me surmising again). LOL And LMAO again on the 'too bad she enjoyed feeling dirty' line. Loved that. And damn!!! We almost got a shirtless Draco - the stubborn git!!!

And damn those trackers are good. Quite the worry, this lot. Not as worried as I am that Draco already had everything they needed like the necklace and the map. What's he up to now? I refuse to believe he was going to leave her though. LOL And as for the ending of the chapter - what an aaaaawwww moment. Very sweet!

Oh and if you change that latte to a mocha, I'm betting they get there the day Alvida is supposed to die. Long enough to tell her what they can of what is going to happen before the trackers catch up with them and burn down her cottage. LMAO ;)

I am very picky and its hard to find a story that will make me jump for joy when it is updated. You my friend have made such a story. Its wonderful. I love it keep up the good work

awwww...it is cute. wonder how far they're going to go by the time they go back to their own time. and what will be going on once they return home? is draco going to eventually leave 'mione? will the trackers kidnap them? ooooooohhhhh! so many questions! lol : )
hope you update soon!! although, i shouldnt worry too much. you've done a great job of updating quickly. : ) i like that.
cant wait to read more! looking forward to it!

uh oh, if they intercept it before it gets to france they could change everything!... unless they get there make a copy and then send it on its way.
pft why did hermione apologise? it was all malfoys fault!! :D
i hope there is some more of that in the next chapter!!
update soon!!

another great chapter and oh they kissed, and I love the tension and banter that is still between them. It totally fits, as well as their saviours telling them that they need to join in order to fulfil their destiny was rich, and I laughed so loudly at their confusion to what that meant...lol DUH!!! The story is getting intriguing so please keep the updates coming.

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Scarlet

Love the attention to detail, of course they'd have to change clothes to blend in. I'm pleased you put that in there. Loved Hermione's reaction to seeing Draco in his outfit (I'm sure that laughter was to hide the fact of her attraction for him) and I could easily picture his face when he saw her. LMAO when she told him she wasn't wearing any knickers and that kiss - whew! I have to agree with Casey here though - what the bloody hell did she apologise to him for, Draco kissed her!!!! I din't want it to end there either. Post more soon (please)! :)