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Great chapter xxx

I think 21 days

So her cloak is gone? And he's got the food? Or just the stone? Anyway, update soon. :D

Poor Draco it must be really tough to want someone you were taught to hate. He's weakening though....and its obvious to see that She is as irresistable to him as he is to her. I'm enjoying them struggle to want to be with each other and try to figure out whats right. You're doing a wonderful job writing their emotions....

Your descriptions are awesome as well...I feel like I can see where they are and what they are doing.

As for when they will get to the cottage? I am thinking they'll get there just in time, but so will the Trackers so there will be some sort of confrontation..... =) I look foraward to more!

Actually this trip is an important one for Draco. It's a life changing one - when (if) they get back he has a choice whether or not to do the right thing and fight for what's good. Will he allow his prejudices (which he knows deep down are wrong) to rule him or will he make a decision based on how he truly feels and knows in his gut is right? It's also important for Hermione - will she allow her own prejudices to rule her? Will she believe that people can change and that a man's actions make him, not what he spews from his mouth? Believing in Draco and standing by him will be good for her as well.

I loved the "Well fuck. He did." OMG - I was just ROFL! And I'm so glad he kissed her again at the end, he must realize she's not experienced. Oh, and I caught the 'make love until we drop' instead of 'fuck you until we drop' comment. I wonder if Draco realized what he had said.

Oh and I guess they get there the day before she 'dies' (am agreeing with Dreamweaver's theory) so they have a day or night to plan what they will do. I think you'll give them that edge.

I think this was a fantastic chapter - I love how you mix the realism of the time, their predicament and attraction all in one. Oh Draco taking her like that was hot and I'm so proud of Hermione staking her claim, even if its temporary (can I hope and pray that it won't be by the end?). I hope Draco becomes the man we all know he can be other than the man his father expects him to become. He needs to make his own choices and follow his gut and feelings. One can hope for him, I think Hermione does.

I'm a bit worried about her dealing with the pain now in her shoulder, I hope they get to their destination quickly for some relief.

thanx for updating so soon! i'm glad that draco hadn't stolen the bracelet and the map for selfish reasons to take off. i can see that draco is slowly starting to become nice and I'm so glad that he's finally realizing his "love" for hermione. I can tell he loves her already. *squeals with happiness*
that one scene with hermione was hot. i loved that you added that bit. so glad that they managed to relieve some stress since they're being hunted down and all... lol
are they going to go further soon? i hope that if they do, draco will be really gentle with hermione. i hope that them having sex might speed draco's mind up a bit about him loving hermione.
loving your story so much! cant wait for your next update! looking so forward to it!

I've never been overly fond of time turner stories, but this one is absolutely fantastic. Very well writen. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow - great action and of course leave it to Hermione to get the hang of wandless magic so quickly. She is remarkable. Okay Draco can be a fucking stupid idiot at times. During that whole opening sequence I just wanted to SMACK him so hard.

Honestly woman! You don't update often enough for me! LoL LOVING this story, dearest and the Hermione/Draco dynamic you've buikt. Keep up the great work!!!

I love this FIC! It's so well written... and It gets me at the edge of my seat! XD I can't wait for more... Keep em coming! ..please? Hehe