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Beautiful.

Gonna be honest, I didn't notice, or obviously mind the shortness of that chap. It went above and beyond any scenarios I had dreamed up while anticipating the next update. This only makes me all the more nervous for their return, because even if Draco decided to switch sides I'm sure not everyone will be all to pleased about what has happened and Hermione's feelings, in the event that does happen I do hope it won't take everyone to long to come to their senses and be happy about Hermione's happiness. Anyway, I'm rambling, sorry, loved it!

Lovely chapter, but I am worried all that conjuring will bring the Trackers too close. And what about the Stone? :D

You made me cry. You're not allowed to make me cry! That chapter was simply breath taking. And my goodness that brought back memories. What an intense relationship they have and I love Hermione's inner thoughts of knowing how she felt and even if it was only for one night, she was going to love a lifetime's worth within it. And there she goes trying to fix things again. Trying to coax Draco back 'into the light', show him there's a chance for redemption for him that she would be there for him if he wanted her to be. The bathtub scene was just so intimate and sensual and giving even if they didn't realise what they were doing and when she begged him to make love to her - sheesh! Your love making scene was fantastic, caring, considerate, the worshipping and slow exploring all wrapped up in her innocence - perfect. Well done you!!!!!!! Keep writing like that and I am going to insist you put a 'needs tissues' warning on your chapters. LOL

I really like this little chapter...it shows progression of their relationship. Hey, I'd do whatever Draco wanted for a repeat of what he did in the forest...yummy

Loved the story, so far. I am wondering where you have them, back in time, that would now be in present-day London, as opposed to one of its suburbs. And I am wondering about the stone.....was it in the bag, or did Hermione manage to keep it on her person? :D

dont worry, it wasn't too short. and you update so fast! *stares in awe*
loved it. i'm glad they finally made it to a town, and i wonder if they're going to find a room that night. and will draco do something naughty to hermione? *giggles* oh, and i hope hermione is ok. dont want her getting sick too badly... :(
looking forward to more! : )

Bloody hell, I only just finished chapter 9 and now there's another one. Woo hoo! LOL Best of luck with your writing degree and I do hope you get your dream of writing a best seller (or several) some day. :) Oh and if my spiels do bother you, please let me know and I'll curb it down.

LMAO - All that passion, all those kisses and racy thoughts stemmed from the innocent way she leaned up to tell him it was her turn to take watch!!!!!! LOVED IT! And the imagery of a male actually popping a vein in his dick = priceless. He did a great job of giving her her first orgasm but it's a bit unfair that he had to then take care of himself. Given the state of her innocence I guess he did the right thing though. But I love that she was more realistic about things then he was. She seems to have already accepted that it's a sidetrack for them while he seems convinced she's going to fall in love with him and it's just another bit of guilt he'll have on his conscience. Having the wolf in the forest was a great addition too, I was expecting that given the time they are in so am pleased to see mention of it. :) Damn lucky they managed to find an apple tree too. LOL

And there's the Gryffindor I love, coming straight out with it and saying what she wants and expects of their time together and the attraction she knows he feels. And another aww moment that she took the pain of his shoulder from him. I was a bit surprised that Hermione would only research half a spell but who knows why that's the case, the important part was it made Draco realise that not everyone is as selfish as he expects them to be and there are some poeple willing to sacrafice things even for him. Brilliant!! Okay, next chapter.

Sneaky Draco - what a Malfoy wants a Malfoy gets indeed. Still they have their food now and all we have to do is wait for nightfall and that promise he made. LMAO Damnit, have to wait for another chapter now, don't we? LOL

As for Hermione, I wish she wasn't so self sacraficing all the time. She does need to take better care of herself in order to be at her best for everyone else when they need her. Times like these that she reminds me of Molly Weasley, running around being everyone's 'mother' and taking no time out for herself. Did I mention I'm looking forward to nightfall? LOL

Oh and I guess if we're right, Margaritama and I will be sharing a cuppa. I hope we get cookies with that. ;) LMAO And finally (yes I will be shutting up shortly) thank you for taking a quick peek at one of my stories too, much appreciated. :)

You are an update machine, and I'm not going to complain about it one bit. Historical fiction has always been my weakness, so when this story cropped up I was beyond excited. You write the period well, and I've been enjoying your writing immensely, can't wait for more!

I'm looking forward to Draco making good on his promise, but I do hope it works out, since sometimes a lack of food and then suddenly eating what can seem like a feast can sometimes make one drowsy O.o, ah, I wont worry myself, I'll just be impatient in my wait for the next chapter.

thanks for the quick updates!! :o)
I like the direction you are taking this!
keep it up!

xoxo