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My goodness, you went and sneaked in 3 more chapters, totally delish chapters at that. All that action, my goodness, I don't know whether I am still fighting off the Trackers, getting flung out of a skiff and flailing down the rapids or floating in and out of consciousness in a feverish haze giving out all these wonderful clues without really answering any questions. Love, love, love that through all his self doubt and loathing Draco kept fighting through his troubles, kept thinking 'what would Hermione do' and just kept on going. And I felt sad too that he had all these skills and not one of them (until the very end) was of any real use to him. That was brilliant, anyone who can make you feel you're right there in the story going through everything the characters are feeling and experiencing is a Master of the highest Order indeed. ;) Well done!! (again). :)

Definitely lots of action....but I thought they were supposed to meet the other witch in that town. Maybe I was confused? Keep updating! :D

I love the danger and actions scenes....oh no, is she still bleeding though? she should tell Draco about the wound and that she loves him.

I want you to know that I had a moment of panic when I read that you won't update anymore. I have this habit of just skimming author's notes on my way down to the review button and that was all that my mind processed before I read the rest of that sentence. lol Anyway, fantastic update, I'm still waiting for one of them to finally give in and just admit that they're in love. But knowing Draco and Hermione we're quite possibly in for the long haul eh? I can't wait!

Amazing! It was hot and steamy (like their bath) can't wait for the next chapter

Well, I think Draco is starting to feel something isn't he as is Hermione....I'm wondering at what point in time they'll actually land back (in the future) as surely time has passed.

PS: wow that bath must have felt GREAT

Phew - close call...thanks goodness they didn't "finish." I think Draco would have beaten HIMSELF bloody.

wow, very hot! :D
update soon

xoxo

I love this story. I really hope that when it's time for them to return Draco will have grown a pair and stay with Hermione. lol I can't wait for more!!

I'm really enjoying it, though I'm eager to see where you are going to go with the story. Their first time was really sweet and Draco seems so vulnerable I just want to hug him.