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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated. And how wonderful they've got all their stuff again! Can't wait for Draco's decision, and its repercussions. ;D
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm relatively new to this pairing and I've read so much Gawdawful stuff that I almost gave up on finding good material, especially after ContraVeritas went down. When I do write, it's not fanfic and there's just so much fanfic that ..... has promise but is in complete need of spell check and a decent beta!
It's evident that you've outlined what you want to write and I like the character development. D & H start out very in character with canon but they're in a situation requiring them to grow up and handle the life they're creating. Other than a few colloquial things that might be a bit 'out of place' in the 13th century (and as they don't glare they're not worth 'taking points'...lol!), you've really done a bang up job and I look forward to each new chapter. Thanks for putting this out!!! I hope to see more of your work soon.
It's evident that you've outlined what you want to write and I like the character development. D & H start out very in character with canon but they're in a situation requiring them to grow up and handle the life they're creating. Other than a few colloquial things that might be a bit 'out of place' in the 13th century (and as they don't glare they're not worth 'taking points'...lol!), you've really done a bang up job and I look forward to each new chapter. Thanks for putting this out!!! I hope to see more of your work soon.
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay they made it!!
update soon please!
update soon please!
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh what an interesting interesting take.
I must say how fast they progressed with their feelings was startling, but I suppose in some way it made sense. I mean love is unpredictable and knows no time limit. And when two people have been dancing through some kind of passion their whole lives....well you know the old attage I'm sure. Thin lines and all that.
I suppose I just wasn't used to everything developing so dramatically in each chapter. Definitely keeps a reader on their toes!! lol
I adore this by the way. I began reading the other night...kept falling asleep though(sick) and finally got here and just went "Gahhh I have to give a review. Too good a story not too". I'm very stingy with my reviews. LOL
I really adore Draco's internal struggles. I mean Hermione was exactly how I expected, naive but passionate and sure. So even though I adore her there's never really a big surprise with her. With Draco in any well written story there's always such an amazing surprise with his internal thoughts and his feelings. I really enjoy his!!!
My heart is always in my throat while reading, waiting and waiting for the next thing to come at them. It's intense!! haha
Now my only question is...How did Alvida know that Draco was Draco?
I mean wasn't it just Sari who had a "feeling" they were coming...and still with that "feeling" she didn't know who and when. So how did Alvida??? Most bizarre.
I sincerely hope you update soon. I love how fast you do btw. And if you're at all interested in reading some Dramione, check out my story. Come Together.
Much Love & Respect,
dM
I must say how fast they progressed with their feelings was startling, but I suppose in some way it made sense. I mean love is unpredictable and knows no time limit. And when two people have been dancing through some kind of passion their whole lives....well you know the old attage I'm sure. Thin lines and all that.
I suppose I just wasn't used to everything developing so dramatically in each chapter. Definitely keeps a reader on their toes!! lol
I adore this by the way. I began reading the other night...kept falling asleep though(sick) and finally got here and just went "Gahhh I have to give a review. Too good a story not too". I'm very stingy with my reviews. LOL
I really adore Draco's internal struggles. I mean Hermione was exactly how I expected, naive but passionate and sure. So even though I adore her there's never really a big surprise with her. With Draco in any well written story there's always such an amazing surprise with his internal thoughts and his feelings. I really enjoy his!!!
My heart is always in my throat while reading, waiting and waiting for the next thing to come at them. It's intense!! haha
Now my only question is...How did Alvida know that Draco was Draco?
I mean wasn't it just Sari who had a "feeling" they were coming...and still with that "feeling" she didn't know who and when. So how did Alvida??? Most bizarre.
I sincerely hope you update soon. I love how fast you do btw. And if you're at all interested in reading some Dramione, check out my story. Come Together.
Much Love & Respect,
dM
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahah sorry, I've been reading your story everyday that you post but I've never left a review. I'm just lame like that. I really really love your story. The amount of imagery you put into your action sequences is astounding! I can picture everything in my head perfectly. And your sex scenes are touching and super hot, which is a CARAZY combination. I can't wait to see what they decide - assuming Draco tells Hermione about staying in the past. Will they choose to stay together, or go back to the future where it will be much more dificult!? Anyway, love love loving it. Like Mcdonald's lol. By the way, if you like d/h your should check out some of my fics.
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is simply great... If you need and ego bust here is comes: brilliant, magnifincent, ingenius, lovely, funny... Resuming Great!!!!!!!!!!
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
rawr - Draco went native on these bastards...yeah. love how he protected Hermione and called her his woman.
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really this story just keeps getting better and better. I'm on the edge of my seat!
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, exciting chapters!.. uh oh, how much blood has she lost??
update soon
update soon
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is defenetly a great adventure and romance for this two and as always Hermione kicking some ass.. Well Draco is not far behind..LOL... Please keep them coming