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for Breaking the Chain

by RynStar15

person Citten
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay i ABOUSOULTY LOVE THIS STORY!! sorry about the eye (i know how it is with contacts-i ware them too!)hope that you feel better soon!
i dont think i have review before sorry but i just finally caught up with where you were. i would love to see any or all of the different version of the story! and you can make it as long as you want--the longer the better i always say! ;) i will be watching for updates!
i love how you can convay the emotions so well and so many at once! i love it! please post as soon as your eye will allow! :)
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yet another fantastic update. I am still stubbornly sticking to the hope that Draco will come to his senses. lol I can't wait for more!
person kazfeist
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update....a really action-packed one, too! Can't wait for the end of the story, to see how Draco ends up. Hope your eye heals, too. :D
person Anon
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I would hate to have been in Hermione's place just then. I think I can still taste the dirt. Once again another wonderfully action packed chapter that had me on the edge of my seat. Sheer brilliance.

Oh and I agree with Casey, hope you've read the Twilight books too.
person apolla92
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing! can't wait for the next post!
person javolk
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter! I thought you were going to leave us with a cliffhanger when Hermione had to dig herself out! I can't wait to find out how they are going to act when they get back!
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!! ^_^ can't wait to read the next one!
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woww you're a really good writter :) can't wait for the next update!
person kazfeist
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, so far. The action with the Trackers will be spectacular, I'm sure. :D
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it!

gaahhh... i hate where you ended that, but i love it too, because now i can't wait for the next update, I keep checking back more often than i should, but oh well. :D