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for Breaking the Chain

by RynStar15

schedule March 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nooo, how can you leave it with this cliff hanger, can't wait for the next part of this story, 

schedule March 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That's just downright sadistic. Another cliffhanger? Evil doesn't even come close. Loved the chapter,  especially the fact that Ginny knows. 

schedule March 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You are killing me Smalls! These cliffhangers are just too ooh torturous to take. And the tension just mounts. Another very good chapter. 

schedule March 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Gee, spend a few days at my daughter's house taking care of sick kids and all hell breaks loose. Will these two poor kids ever be able to have a happily ever after together? One can only hope. Love it so far. 

schedule March 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

One word for you.  Evil! Thanks for the frequent updates. 😊

schedule March 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thanks, loved the second anniversary present, this was our 39th.  Not bad for a couple that people were betting would only make it to two. Poor dumb, noble Draco cutting off his nose to spite his face. 

schedule March 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Another amazing story! I'd love to see a continuation of it though. I wanna see what happens. Do they get home? Can they really go back as though nothing happened between them??? I must know!!!

schedule March 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter but I'm getting too old for this kind of tension. 😉 Now to se how stumbling, bumbling Draco fixes this mess he's created and hopefully still get the girl. 

schedule March 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Lovely anniversary present. 

schedule March 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Lord, I hope Draco follows Milo's advice about the future. How evil to live it in a  cliff hanger. Evil, evil evil. Shame on you. Great chapter tho, glad to know that their savior doesn't actually die.