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for Breaking the Chain

by RynStar15

schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Snape!
Thank you for updating. A lovely story. I must confess that I hope she's not pregnant, but I'm sure I'll enjoy the next update either way.
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it Love it Love it Now we only need some butt kicking especially Lucius and Voldy... Draco is so cute.. .LOL
person javolk
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco! I hope nobody gets the wrong idea about Harry and Hermione!

Great chapter! Please update soon!!!
person apolla92
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love it! that was a freaking awesome chapter! can't wait for the next!
person Tenar10r
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fluer should be spelled "Fleur"
I am loving this story! You have a gift for action scenes and I like the way you mix cannon and non-cannon themes!
I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well they were certainly welcomed back very differently. I half expected them to turn up somewhere else in time. :) Poor Draco, I did so want to hug him and make it all better. LOL And as for Hermione, I didn't know whether to tell Ron to back off or to hug him too. I guess he has more emotional depth than a teaspoon after all. LOL I think I would have bathed for as long as she did too. Of course there are some things you just can't wash away.

And yes, you do indeed have a busy life out there in the real world, so don't stress, we know you'll update when you can. :)
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
We need a breakthrough please, something I plea, they need to found each other ... they need to and he needs to turn to the Order, rescue Narcissa and kick some butts... LOL I know too much into it... LOL Keep them coming please
person kazfeist
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good transition chapter. Nice cliffhanger at the end. Hopefully Draco's Occlumency skills were up to the task to which he set them. :D
person apolla92
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
woo! that was awesome! can't wait for the next post! :]
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh. Poor Draco! I'm not getting why he cares what happens to father. His mother I think I can understand as we haven't seen any real interaction between them but if it were me I'd just say screw it and hope that Voldemort punished Lucius. Anyway, really fantastic update, I can't wait for more!