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for Breaking the Chain

by RynStar15

person mag7ical
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooh I can't wait to see Draco's reaction to Hermione being a bait. Hopefully that knocks him into his senses.
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story! It's such a unique plot, and the characters aren't even OOC! I can't wait for the next chapters!
person apolla92
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
eek! what a great chapter i can't wait for the next post! i loved you depiction of Ron in that situation i could totally imagine that! Update ASAP!
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh what a cliffy!!
So exciting...so sorry this is a short review...I'm on the run! But I love this story and I sincerely think you've got talent.

Can't wait for more.


xo
dM
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!
I'm curious as to why Snape isn't telling Hermione the truth, but I'm sure it's for his own wily reasons! Yay, Snape.
I really liked the part with her remembering being with Draco, because awwww.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Tenar10r
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is Snape moron or what she is pregnant for heaven's sake... AGGHHHHHHHH! Sorry to much into it!! Please let her know that Draco did it for a reason... that he loves her and let Draco know that Hermione is pregnant.. Keep them coming...
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pregnant? hmmmmmmm interesting...

update soon
person Citten
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'k loved that chapter!! poor draco now he is worried but maybe he found a way to work things to his advantage this will be interesting. i am so looking forward to more!!! so harry and hermione find a comfort with each other in a non-sexual way, truely like family. well now what will severus be doing to help draco and will he tell the order? oh so much to know--please update and soon!!!!! :)
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was just so sad. I mean I was laughing my arse off at the thought of Draco trying to work out when was the 'right' time for a witch to fall pregnant and how he thought that would stop her going into battle but the rest of it - the conversation with Snape, the other thoughts running around his head and the news of the horcruxes as he finally realised what he ahd done - oh that brought a tear to my eye. And then when I read Hermione's part about how she crawled into bed with Harry for a bit of the comfort they shared that was a secret just between them - sniff! Beautiful!!