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for Breaking the Chain

by RynStar15

schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im anxious to know what happens next eeek!! Great chapter updates soon!
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Arghh Cliffhangers! get the next bit up!! :) x
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to be honest this chapter is heart felt for me I imagine both suffering and pull apart between duty and heart. Hey is not easy... Brilliantly written.. Keep them coming will be watching.
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm *sniff* so *sniff* heartbroken *sob*

Poor Draco....*outright bawling* and Hermione!
person javolk
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*GASP* This is a Dramione story so I know that she lives, but still the suspense is killing me! Can't wait till the next chapter!
P.S. sorry for not reviewing for a while! finals are in 2 weeks and I need to study!
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story, I can not wait for the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm almost too stunned to write anything. Only almost. LOL Double here since I missed a chapter but OMG both of them were just so sad and so unexpected. I did not expect anything this drastic even though the hint was always there. I always imagined Snape to be Draco's mentor and you could see how upset he was that Snape seemed disappointed in him. And oh that letter from his mother. Where was your 'needs tissues' warning? Goshdarnit!!!!!! LOL That was so beautiful and I could easily picture her saying exactly that to him.

And then Hermione, poor Hermione. She seems to be paying for far too many mistakes, none of which were really her own devising. Now she feels guilty that Ron likes her and she doesn't feel the same. And she thinks Draco has betrayed her even though we know he bloody well hasn't. And she's got to dig into that Gryffindor bravery and courage and face this latest task with Snape making it very clear what ehefeels about her involvement in all of this too. Wow, that was so emotional. Well done!! :)
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much, can't wait for the next update, even though I have a bad feeling about near death to one half of my favorite AU HP Ship. :(
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Martyrdom can be very annoying (like in Twilight), but this is a realistic way for her agree to sacrifice herself. Looking forward to more Draco!
person apolla92
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter! can't wait for more!