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for Breaking the Chain

by RynStar15

person Fallen Star
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was pure evil leaving it there!!! You are killing me woman I am on the edge of my computer chair cussing you and that damn cliff.... *heading towards the bb gun* Now what did we talk about last time!!!!! By the way Great chapter!
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hope that sandwich was good! Damn you and the cliffies....
person apolla92
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NO! what a cliffhanger, you have to post asap!
person Citten
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AH! YEAH! AH! i am torn i am excited that you are considering the other options! :) but, but you cant just leave us there!!! for you better be updating soon!!! please. :) now one thing was that really ron or was that for hermiones benifet only? please, please update and soon!!!
person apolla92
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
holy crap! that was intense! i need more! post asap!
person Anon
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My apologies for not keeping up to date with my reviews, I hope you don't mind a mesh rather than the spiels I usually do. LOL Probably be grateful for the extra space. LMAO

Now, first off, I hope you are recovering from your so called boyfriend's little tackle. LOL Honestly, he should take better care of his lady or at least pick a softer place for you to land on. ;)

Chapter 26 was hot, raunchy, heart wrenching and sweet. And yes I am jealous of a fictional character. LOL It was definitely a night you'd want to remember. What a pity she can't. (well, maybe not for a while, huh???) LOL

Chapter 27 - love the picture you found. That was wonderful. Yay for Ginny for keeping quiet and letting him say his goodbye although it's sad that Hermione didn't get to do the same. A part of her might well wonder if it was all a dream (and what a dream) ;) LOL How typical of Hermione to have all her belongings sorted out and letters to go off to all she cares about. That was a bittersweet touch. Loved the bit with Neville. He's always been a favourite of mine. :) I'm actually pissed off with Snape now for what he just did. Ah and Hagrid coming in and telling her how angry he had been when he heard the news - perfect. And after all that careful plannng, they get attacked anyway.

Chapter 28 - Thank goodness for Draco being able to hide his thoughts, hey? Otherwise there'd be a hell of a lot of trouble. Blast Snape and his change of plans though. I wonder what that's all about and Voldemort, le shiver, he is cold and vile but certainly not stupid, you can tell he doesn't completely trust Draco but he's keen to see how it all plays out.

Chapter 29 (finally I've caught up - LOL) Okay, so Dumbledore created the barrier around the school, yes? So he must have known something to pass this information on to Snape. Feeling a bit better here now. LOL And of course she'd give herself up for her loved ones, that was a given. And oh, the torture he put her through so quickly. But when it came to Bellatrix, I loved the way Hermione kicked her arse. Wandless magic indeed. Of course, I'm still waiting to find out why Draco was so excited to find her hair and what his plan was (although I do have a theory) so that was an interesting twist having her be able to do that and surprise Voldemort that way.
person Citten
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh he changed plans! i cant wait to see what you have planned!!!! please dont be too long before you update againg cause the supense is killing me! the question is did he really find out or did he just not want draco there? poor draco! okay now more then ever i really do hope that you will--WILL--write the other options that you had so we could read them all!! :) (just renumber them the same and put the letter next to the chapter so we know! :) PLEASE!!) ....what else is there to say but hurry! ;)
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey ,my heart on the edge here, what a cliffhanger Jesus!!!!!!!!!!!!!.... Hey keep them coming I just want to see Hermione kick some asses, as well as Draco... Hey they are my favorites...
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My heart is going crazy right now. I love this story. I really hope they both make. Update soon.Love Love
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I'm confused about Voldemort's actions. I shall be patient. Thanks for the update.