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for Breaking the Chain

by RynStar15

schedule July 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

The emotions I felt reading this! God this was so good. Definitely my favorite story thus far. I just wish there was more. This was an excellent read❤❤

person Teri1211
schedule October 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I read this all at once.  I loved it until Ithought you had killed of Draco, then I was very upset.  Altenate choice/universe  thing fixed it nicely.  A  very good read indeed thank you

schedule July 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

??? Why did you post chapter 35 twice? Great chapter and enjoyed rereading it but was just wondering. 

schedule March 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 23- So many times I had to put my tablet down and walk away because the welling of tears threatened to ruin my composure at work. It took a long while to get through that chapter. My dear, you have such a way with words. Your stories are incredible, and i am so glad to have found you here. Thank you for the escapes, the tears, the joys, the feels!!!! You are definitely in my top 5 authors. 

schedule March 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Gee, have a broken phone for a few days and come back to this! Will be interesting to see how the two separate time lines will be resolved. 

schedule March 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yay!! Together again! That was so beautiful! I love how you wrote that rescue! I can't wait for more :)

schedule March 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is one of the best, most creative dramione stories I have ever read! I fell in love right along with them, stressed during the battles,  my heart broke and I cried as she fell to pieces at the funeral. You writing is truly magic in itself- I felt like I was right there, witnessing it all. I'm eagerly looking foward to your next chapter, hoping that Draco and Hermione get that much deserved happy future that cruelly passed them by the first time. Thank you so much for this!

person MotekElm
schedule March 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yay, I'm so excited for the ending to come

person MotekElm
schedule March 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Loving it, but (SPOILER)

 

 

I really hope Draco is not really dead. Obviously you have to bring him back to the fight. What fun. I love warrior Hermione. Especially with wandless vengeful magic

schedule March 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You are just downright mean! Another evil cliffhanger?  And here I am taking care of two sick grandkids, already being worked to bits with no joy in sight for the near future.  ðŸ˜¢