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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, but the program seems to have messed up your punctuation a bit. I read this over on FF.net, but since I didn't have a login I couldn't review. I won't give anything away for those who haven't, but this is going to be VERY good.
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome ... and what is happen to umbridge when the new get out that she had broken miones wand in sted of holding it .... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's an interesting start, can you alter the formatting though, all your apostrophes have come out as O's which is a bit distracting to read!
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
is this posted on ff.net? if so let us know.
if a story is posted in its entirety i'd like to read it...lol
if a story is posted in its entirety i'd like to read it...lol
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would like to read this, But it's kinda hard with what seems to be coding issues, do you think you can fix it?
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an AWESOME beginning! I have only one request. PLEASE make Umbridge really REALLY pay somehow. She never did and it has always bugged the heck out of me. Thank you and I look forward to a lot more. HG4eva
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
why does the summary say complete if you haven't completed it yet?