rate_review Reviews

I was so exited when I found this story completed when I looked into this archive after a few days abcense, and you have done such a marvellous job!!!
I have read almost the whole day, your plot and writing kept me reading just a bit more and a bit more.... The plot around the children and the Thalium was true brilliance, I am so impressed by your work. Again, a wonderful story!!!!

Okay, I have to admit that I usually review every chapter, but I soooo wanted to know the who, what, when and where of your story, that I neglected to. Thanks for such a fun read.

Great story! It was an original plot that was well told! Excellent work and I can't wait to read more of your writing in the future!

I absolutely loved this story! Did I read it right? This was your first fic? Oh wait ... your first completed fic. Meh ... potato ... poh-tah-toe. It was awesome nonetheless.

I just noticed that you posted 2 new stories under Lucius and Hermione so I'm off to go read those next.

I just wanted to say great job on this one. I just wished that you had Hermione beat up Umbridge or something. Life in Azkaban just doesn't scream fair to me. *sigh* Oh well ... maybe in one of your future fics (hint hint wink wink) ... ha ha ... yeah, I'm evil! *grins*

congrats on your first completed story. i quiet enjoyed it. i hope you write more stories to enjoy. good luck.

Such a good story, I have really enjoyed it. I love when people write fanfic in a certain genre, and mysteries are my big favorite. The plot was original and well thought-out. My only complaint would be that the actual relationship between Hermione and Lucius seemed kind of... underdone, maybe? It would have been nice if you had fleshed it out a little, given us more of them together. They spent more time angry at each other than anything else ;-)

I rarely review on AFF, but I had to tell you how happy I am that for the first time I am reading a marriage law fic where Hermione rebels!!! I have read some good ones, but I am always a little miffed that Hermione doesn't stand up to the ministry and gives into them taking her freedom away. Thank you so much!!! I am thrilled that she is giving them hell.

I'm liking your first chapter, and am interested to see what is going on.
Will the orphanage be where she does her potions?

This is shaping up nicely its really interesting so far. But please please try to change whatever aff is doing to your punctuation marks, its really hard to read as it is!

Yah - you brought this story to AFF.net...I never got to finish it.