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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
one of the most amazing stories i have ever read...brilliantly woven and equally brilliantly written
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I didn't even make the connection about Buttercream's toad *smacks forehead*. That was great though. Very in character for both of them, even in bringing them together. That was totally believable and kept me guessing; everything I could ask for.
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April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I came upon this story purely by happenstance, it was listed as a favorite story by another author, they raved about it, so I decided to check it out. Wow, they were so right! This is one of the most amazing plots that I have read. You have completed a wonderful piece of literature and I would even venture a guess that if you reworked characters, setting up independent backgrounds and the like, it could become an actual novel. Well done! Keep up the writing, you clearly have a gift.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My overall review of your story. I had read the first chapter back in the beginnig of March. At first I thought it was going to be sort of childish. I did not think it was going to have so much mystery and angst. You have done such a wonderful job. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Umbridge is such an evil woman. I am so happy the kitten bit her leg. Serves her right.
Liz
Liz
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know those moments when you're reading a really good book or something that has a lot of twisty plot, and you figure something out from a little action or discription that seems insignificant?
WELL I FIGURED IT OUT! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
I think. I just had put it out there. I plan on reviewing more extensively after I finish the entire story.
And to think I liked that toad and thought of Trevor when you mentioned it the first time. -.-
Cheers!
WELL I FIGURED IT OUT! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
I think. I just had put it out there. I plan on reviewing more extensively after I finish the entire story.
And to think I liked that toad and thought of Trevor when you mentioned it the first time. -.-
Cheers!
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really neat story! I especially liked the pseudo-science, not the least because my husband is an OB/Gyn, and the issue of healthy childbirth is a topic of much conversation in our home. The fight scene at the last, overlaid with Hermione's reminiscences was a great image. My favority Malfoy pairing with Hermione is that of Draco, as I think their ages are better, but this was a great second pairing. :D
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such a fun and engaging story. Lots of angst and an lots of love, trying for it anyway. I'm racing through the chapters, but had to stop and tell you how much I'm enjoying this. Cheers!
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent and engaging HG/LM story. Thank you for sharing this with us. You wove a wonderful adventure! Cheers!
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable story with good attention to detail. I eagerly awaited each chapter. :)
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was a really good story with a great idea to explain the low birth rates in the Death Eater pureblood families. I thought it was well written with believable dialog. Hermione was a little weepy but hey she's a bit entitled as she's had a rough 3 years. It couldn't be easy or really healthy to not being doing magic all that time. We know she can get along doing things the muggle way but she's a powerful witch and not using her magic much had to be a strain on her physically. Not to mention being isolated from her friends.